ever gonna come back and finish? was a great and engaging story. felt genuinely different which was a nice change of pace. it's been 9 months since last updated.
A story well written!Young boys going on a adventure. A horror novel mixed with sci-fi and adventure. Author did a good work making up sentences. As a reader I got easily immersed while reading.
This is a high quality read. The first few chapters are spent setting up the world and the core cast of characters and I must say I was quite immersed and can't wait to read more. The protagonist is a great well-rounded character, facing countless obstacles in her early life, but has a strong personality as is evidenced by the way she defends herself verbally and physically when a gang of bullies target her. Spelling and grammar are top top notch and the prose flows along nicely, making this easy to read and enjoyable. Highly recommended reading!
1- the WG dosnt give out bounties for randoms for no reason, so mc getting a bounty for just fighting mihwak is retarded. Hell they didnt even approach him, and yet they gave him a bounty. Thats stupid. High bounty is dope, but give a reason. Hell luffy punched a noble and attacked marine ford and destroyed impel down and he only had his bounty raised by 100 mill (though all fans hated this, and i agree...)but i hope u get what i mean2- what retard tells that they are from another world? Dude, u dont do this. Why would u do this? Unique power is believable, especially in one piece3- why is MC so trusting that he gives this info within hrs of meeting? I get they fought but seriously? Telling u are from another world to a stranger? I am an amnesiac would've been enoughLook story is interesting, dope even BUT damn man, no bash/flame but ur bk has some retarded shit
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