its fine aside from being sssoooosssssslow pace and some redundant scenarios, lil bit better than chinese garbage.
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The story is very good and beautifulAnd then every chapter I am waiting for the next one?
author, can you give me recommendations on good novels like this one from royal road??
Is the novel axed other? As in there will be no more updates ?
Was thinking of not reading since the book can easily be drop like the last son of terra and the others. he gets you excited and dump you
巫师：从骑士呼吸法开始肝经验Very long story worth the read
When you come to Africa fantasy fiction magic this novel is the best and original.One thing is that the novel is still in developing stage including Aguda empire::- The legend of omalinze.Mark my word once this novel is competed media industries will want to make movie out of this novelI will still reserve some of my reviews till the novel is competed
I loved it. Certainly diferent, and the action scenes are very cool. Definitely one to keep in your library and see how it develops. I want to see if the prince falls for the maid or not.
Currently at chapter 30.I'm loving itJokes aside, I enjoy reading this novel a lot because of how new the idea is and how this new idea isn't completely butchered by a dog water mc or rubbish translating. There are a few moments in the novel that I dont like but nothing big so go ahead and give it a try.
I dare you to give this story a try. There's a really interesting story here. A genuine slice of life story that paces itself working with a system concept. The story seems developing well. Overall, this story is a compelling read.Personally, I like a little bit more depth to my characters as well as my world building. Slice of life fiction is not really my cup of tea either. ^-^;;I hope you keep up the great work.
Hello author! Good writing skills!I have read this book and it is very different And unique concept to the other novels I have read about fiction. This can surely hold readers interest. here are some of my suggestions That I like to recommend So your book can be more appealing ;-you can use Grammarly For improving your writing.(webnovel also suggest you to use that!)-And upload Your content daily.(as you are doing and send it on diffrent platforms for promotion to attract more reader base)That ‘s it. I hope you can take into account my suggestions regarding your work.Here is my 5 stars not only for your plot but also for your courage to write. As an author I also know it’s Hard to take first steps so I wish you to be a successful Writer.Keep it up!
Goalkeeper system or watching football system? read until chapter 14 and drop because author keep writing about MC watching football game only.