The beginning started rather smoothly and nice but then it's a rush in turning the Mc into an OP Character with lot of holes missing key parts for the storry sadly also nothing new compared to other storrys
Writing Quality - 3/5, mainly because they're aren't a lot of mistakes, their are also times where several mistakes in a row have happened. I know English isn't the author's first language, but still, they're thereStability of Updates - 4/5, mainly because there have been plenty of updates since the last time I started this series, (which it only had around 20ish chapters)Story Development - 2/5, mainly because while there are places where the story can develop, their isn't a main plot in the story, just the ever-increasing strength of ArkCharacter Design - While Ark at the beginning was pretty shaky as a good MC, now (on chapter 117) he has had time to develop, and a large growth in his development has happened.World Background - While we are introduced to new places and are told about certain places, it's really hard to keep track of all of them, as well as we don't see how these different places interact with each otherPoints to work on - Showing more changes in characters * Mainly saying, each character has a set mindset they have, and throughout the story, while Ark did have one change near the beginning of the story, that was the only change we've had throughout the entire book - Polishing up Grammar * There are times where problems in writing come up, rather it's a incorrect spelling, an extra letter or lack of letter, maybe take some more time to really read over the chapter to iron out the few mistakes. It'll take time, but having better quality can change a book from good, to great - Get a Main Storyline * Like I said earlier, the story only has the development of Ark, and other characters, and that's mainly it. While that may be what you want to write about, Character development is a means to an end, not the end itself. You need to have certain goals that Ark should have, or maybe even he doesn't know it yet, but the readers should at least know where the story is heading and what goal Ark should have. If the end goal is making Ark incredibly strong, almost godlike, then we should have goals that are the stepping stones to that end goal. - Give more realistic scenes, both from characters and also the background as well * What I mean is for things to be more realistic than it is now. An example is near the beginning of the story, Ark woke up as an Ice wolf in a cave. As a Wolf, Ark should've seen the world differently as to when he was a human from before. Wolfs have different strengths of senses than humans do, so Ark should've been using his sense of smell for the majority of his beginning time, but instead he only used hearing and sight. His thought process also didn't really change much from his time as a human. As the saying goes, the body reflects the mind, so his thought process should've at least change a little to be a little more wolf-like, maybe more fierce and law of the jungle like, which later it did, but for that first arc in the forest, I didn't see any major changes in thought process. Overall - This series has a very shaky beginning, around 20 chapters into it it starts to get pretty good due to the development of the MC as well as just being with him on his journey. Their are points that could be worked on, mainly having more unique characters or also having drastic changes in characters due to certain actions done to them, like how when Ark was captured and tortured for 5 weeks, we at least saw some difference, but what I'm saying with a more drastic change would be how he see's the world, and how he thinks, because that didn't change, only how he reacts to things has, which to the readers doesn't show as much as thoughts do.
This book has a lot of potential, The MC isn't conceited, show-off, or generic progatonist. He's patient and carefree, which emphasizes the humor behind his naivety. Haven't encountered face slapping scenes or other cliche events yet. It's quiet fun and refreshing to read, the MC's nonsense are pretty humorous and also characters' confusion and helplessness toward MC.
An average novel, no innovation and more of the same. The author could have explored more the cultivation of techniques in an unusual or absurd way and put some comedy.The special talent is forgotten with time and practically only appears later as a tool to identify items.Around chapter 230 the translator abandons it and turns it into an MTL translation and ends up killing the novel once and for all
NO UPDATES FOR A MONTH. Letdown of an translator. If not them then Webnovel let me down since they WONT SAY ANYTHING .....…..........................................................................................................................................
There are lots of inconsistencies around the MC first of all he is NOT a villian, he is at most antagonist co.kblocking so called protoganist's chance encounters. One chapter he cant kill proto because heavenly punishment next chapter it is because point farming..They nominate him as a supreme leader to powerfull guild with semi random excuse. Even with everything going on if we somewhat accept MC is villian he is at most 3rd rate villian with extreme Reality Bending sistem.OK, All systems are bending reality but I dont want to talk about our MC lotery wins. Read it and you will understand why I mention it in this particular case.
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 24/01/2021 @chap100review divided in: Short reviewLong reviewRatingsConclusionshort review: You came here for R-18? You are at the right place! You came here for A big harem? You are at the right place!long review: pros: 1) for those who came here for harem, yep this is for you.. this is really for you.. a very big harem novel2) r-18 scenes short but great! Different set ups so yeah readers will enjoy it!!3) some great comedy scenes, people might enjoy it... cons:1) first 25 chapters mc is "inconsistent". The start is not great!2) writing style becomes confusing (maybe only I am feeling this)3) This really isn't romance. There are few scenes but not really romanceRATINGS: writing: 8/10update: 9/10plot: 8/10characters: 8/10pacing: 8/10dialogues: 8/10entertainment: 9/10OVERALL: 4.1/5Conclusion:Read 25 chapters before thinking whether to continue this novel.World building I can't comment since it's only 100 chapters...A very enjoyable read for those who are searching for R-18 and a lil plot.To all the readers who enjoyed profane prince, this is a must for you!!!!
So far so good. The writting is consistant and the character is interesting. I cannot wait for more!The only thing that is weird iS that the autors name is 9 dragons and The MC only has 7!?
Absolutely love this, and I cant wait too see more of Lin Wu in Walker of the Worlds!
This novel is one of my favorites. Even though this is sequel novel, but i think you don't really have to read the prequel, as the connection start appearing in ~900 chapter. This novel MC's Yi Yun is pretty smart and likeable, he also loyal to his lover. The plot progress smoothly and doesn't exaggerating.
love it there are problems and solutions that are reasonable to a extent and is interesting to read, i hope there's more...............................
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