Very detail-oriented, and I can't help but want to see how the story plays out.
The author here, you know what it is. This is going to be my first proper original story I plan to finish. Check it out and feel free to leave a review if you enjoy.
An interesting story that will keep you from boredom. The characters have depth and I think the plot is really well thought.
Hello author. I tried reading the first 10 chapters but eventually gave up. just my personal opinion but I recommend that you rewrite the starting chapters. The reason why is because the same thing was said multiple times but in different ways. Why would I want to read about the same thing twice?I get that because of the constant time skips, you have to reassure the reader that "the mc has yet to change" but it felt strenuous to read and I wasn't told anything new. Also the world building. You introduced us to the crumbled and war-torn city early on but it wasn't until after a few chapters that I was told that there was an actual group of people living together. Maybe I missed it but there was no explanation for how the (camp?) looked like.These were just my thoughts and a writer can never cater to everyone so I understand if it was just me that prefers a different style of storytelling.
Read only few chapters so far, gotta say I'm intrigued by this, it seems like it's going to be a very thrilling story! the writing is beautiful and extra point for the good grammar only a little criticism is that introducing to many characters at the beginning could confuse other readers, but overall this is off to a good start.
This is Great stuff, I like your writing style and the story is interesting. Its good start and I'm interested in seeing more of this stuff. I'll be checking up on it. Its got potential. Keep up the good work!
Let's start with the synopsis.... Just like Author described in the synopsis- It's a story were mc is the villain and he will destroy all haven-child, I mean protagonists. Well at lest that's what I think...I am currently at chapter 52. In those 52 chapters only 10 days has passed... yup only 10 days has passed since mc came to know that he is a villain, which was in first chapter. So, I would say that the pace in which the story is progressing is very slow, very very slow.Another depressing thing is that Mc is not a villain but more like Protagonists. Why you ask? Well, you see.... for the past 52 chapters all mc did was run after girl and adding girl too his harem, while giving excuses like saying that it was to increase his strength, or to control the big families, or saying that he would steal all the heroines of the protagonists... So, all in all, what I'm trying to say is that, for the first 52 chapters all Mc did was run behind girls and adding them in his harem. He already added 4 members, while 2 more are in the process to be added... Oh and he is also thinking about how add more girls.And another depressing thing is that, no protagonists has appeared up until now. And I don't think any will appear anytime soon... maybe after another 100 chapter. Well. And I don't think mc will stop collecting women anytime soon. Pretty disappointing.Sorry author don't mind my review. I am just frustrated to see that all mc doing collecting women. All in all, not my cup of tea.
The first chapter hooked me in, the author has a good descriptive writing style. there is also a bit of humor. I recommend this book to people who likes humor
The story seems to be some type of darker imitation of second coming of gluttony and some other novels. The plot and the personality of the main character are always being forced. World building is decent though. Grammar is also ok but there are quite a few typos here and there and needs some editing. Well tldr: give it a try but it mostly caters to a niche group of people.
A good review for a good start hehehe. Brother MoonZkun is such a cheater he made a review first i told him that to wait for me.. Keep continue your novel mr author we support you. Kukukuku. If you gonna make another LN i like pokemon stuff the older generation and maybe danmachi for fanfic or anything with a game attribute or system kukuku. Just saying if you had a mental block issue for future. Thanks for the novel
A slow start but I trust the author. I have read the prequel and found it exhilarating. I expect the same from this novel.There is a new protagonist. He seems rather lacking in comparison to Azaroth, but I am willing to wait. I wonder what the Author has in store.
It is strange that you use powerful jewels in your novel, I think that you are innately smart because you do not need to take ideas from the anime, you are wonderful using your mind to entertain us with your wonderful novel