Overall the novel i'll give it a 7/10 from its writing alone I can tell that be author have some experience with handling its character, some my issued are the grammar need some improve but further reading I guess Author fix some of them.Too bad it's only 50chps it would be nice if were full blown series with at least 100+ chps. my only tips I can give is that expand more with r world building & characters I'm sure some of your new titles will surely be better.
Ok so this book is great, the evil mc with a deep hatred against humans is what makes this story stand out from the rest of the vampire novels. However I don't particularly like the idea of Vampires being shown as the weakest race or believed to be so, as to me what makes Vampires unique is their arrogance and superiority complex and the deep fear they struck in the hearts of humans.
Amazing book, love the plot and execution HATE the slow updates. But I will keep reading when it died update and only hope it covers quickee
Not my favourite story from the author but it's fun to pass time and update schedule is great. Might drop later if the story doesn't interest me. It's not to my taste
Just keeps getting better and better. All ur books are great author
Hmm... Nice book I hope it updates frequently. I could really feel her masters anger I really wanna know the dudes name though although "her master" is pretty cool
Great story, this novel is within my top 5.Out of the tens of novels I read on this platform, this is top 1.Good luck and cheers author, I really wish to see a full/completed novel of this quality.
I really like this story, the characters and particularly the relationship between everyone but I wonder if you decide to stop indefinitely your story ?
Por favor mantenha o livro atualizado a história e muito boa não abandone o livro não ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
its a story about a villager coming to a town and finding beautiful girls and describing them in again and again to waste words and chapters.
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