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I've read 6 chapters and I really like the pace. The world is developing very clearly, the secondary characters are vivid, and I hope it stays that way. Meanwhile, the main character retains a lot of mystery about him. I enjoyed his backstory, which adds to his nonchalant personality.Keep it up, author !
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It’s a very solid novel, one of my favorites at the moment, and I think the author has done a great job improving on his writing.Compared to his other novel this one seems to have a more in depth world building and the power system is pretty incredible.My only complaints with this novel so far are:- Main character is extremely cunning, but many times his approach to fights or problems is just one of pure strenght with little strategy, which makes sense against equally powerful or weaker enemies, but he brute forces things even when against enemies or odds he shouldn’t be able to overcome with just power.- I believe there could be a bit more variation in the characters fighting styles and temperaments, most of Cain rivals so far just face him head on.- There are, if I’m not mistaken 6 races in aether, but we have barely seen any character that isn’t a juman be portrayed, not really something that is bad, but I’m curious to know a bit more about the other races.
I don't know, the premise is interesting but the novel itself bores me, spending so much time as a child is boring, I don't know why the need to make that phase so long, and especially when the chapters are not so long and the updates not so frequent.
One of the Best novels i've ever read in this site, why? You will know when you start reading it. ; ) i liked pretty much how the story developed so far.
author here doing what all author do, read the book please.
The author's writing style made every scene imaginable for a more awesome reader experience. The story overall has potential, hoping to read more chapters, Author!
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ???????????????
A great read! You can tell where they got the inspiration from, but the author made it their own storyline. Good pacing and easy flow of the story. Hoping for more chapters! Keep up the good work :)
Hiya writer ,I love the plot. The story is intriguing. The plot,synopsis are to the point. I love the adventure of MC. Hope it would be a mass hit in future. More power to you.
