shubhamsharma9562
This is really sweet; I’d rate it 4.5/5. However, there are some unresolved issues or a lack of further explanation that slightly affect my rating.
1. The flash marriage. As someone not familiar with Chinese culture, I find it quite unusual, especially since ML mentioned that their meeting in the forest wasn’t the first time they met. There’s no additional information provided about their relationship history.
The little brother hinted at a backstory, but I haven’t seen it yet. Hopefully, it’s covered in the extras. (I’ve read up to chapter 68.)
2. I can relate to the father issue, but I was hoping for a bit more context. For example, it would have been nice to know explicitly that she became financially independent, like receiving her team’s paycheck on her own. This is just a minor observation.
, there are relatively few conflicts, which makes this a sweet and enjoyable story.
I attempted to dive into this novel, but I simply couldn't continue. I might be giving up too soon, having only reached chapter 12, but the story feels dull. It might improve later, but the first six chapters are poorly translated, and even the better-translated sections are just plain uninteresting.
The primary issue I had with the story is the plot. The concept of a flying magical sword is intriguing for a moment, but it quickly becomes absurd. Perhaps my initial ideas of how it should have developed are overshadowing what's actually there. A more engaging story might involve someone reincarnated into a legendary hero's sword, embarking on a quest to save the world. However, even if this novel eventually evolves into something like that, the damage is already done. What ultimately turned me off was the sword's absurd skill-stealing ability, which smacks of poor storytelling. In summary, I wouldn't recommend reading this. As it stands, it's a major letdown.
Sorry I wrote on the wrong novel
Hm it fell off, it was pretty fun until it wasn't
its pretty fun to read.. i hope the author doesnt ruin this by making overflowing romance
What happen to the quest of first kill of rabbit in the beginner village
Thank you so much! I'll give a try.
If you’re looking for a cool mc..run. Stop ✋ here. Turn back. Spoiler alert- he’s water-attributed and spells are black tortoise related. Spirit armour also black tortoise themed. Equipment as well…just lame. No hate to xuanwu but looks wise…seriously lame. It seems like he’s another joke mc.
Im planning to read this bcs im nearly done with genius doctor. Just wanna ask, does the mc have friends or human companions?
A shameless review from the author to boost his novel! I hope you enjoy the story. I promise you won’t find it boring. Reach at least the last free chapter to see what it is all about. Let’s fight dragons with mechas!
ps. This isn’t the futuristic style of mecha but instead, magic and compatibility. The development of creation of mecha and the mecha system will be fluid.
drop your questions here, i’ll do my bed to answer them!
So is it completed, or dropped?
This seems exactly like desolate era!
