Peggy looked to the window and thought for a second, "I'll do it."
Xie Puti replied, "Eight"
Her eyes formed a crescent and her eyebrows rose as she said in an alluring voice, "Very Old pick line, better luck next time". She winked at the end, Ren bit her lower lip in response. She shrieked, "hmmmm..." She punched him on his shoulder but he caught her hand.
Hello can i help you? She asks
Most commoners would possess two to three elements, but for a noble to only possess one is really laughable.
"Mm?" Ke YongAn unconsciously let out a noise out of surprise to see Fei Dan walk towards and station himself at ring 1.
"Mommy is missing?" He asked. Zier nodded. "She has a car accident but we can't find her. What should I do?" He asked.
The difference between the higher five categories and the Titled Elves is huge. To give an example; Demonic Elves and Elven Demons. Demonic Elves were Elves with demonic features, while Elven Demons were Demons with elven features.
The story line is very good, but I feel the story moves to fast rather than easing in.
So far a solid story with good back ground an enjoyable read.
Stopped after 10 chapters, way too much misplaced comedy and incoherences, that pulled me out of the story.There's only 1200 pioneers in the world which I assume has a 7 billion population which makes the chance of being one 1 out of 6 million and of course there's 4 of them being in the same school.It's also not explained why monsters would appear before the terraformation, whether they'd appear for everyone,...After getting these powers and the terraformation, you really get the feeling these guys are in a summer camp. Millions of people may die but all they think above is mocking each others and playing jokes.There's also the convenient fact that you have 2 sons of mma champions, a champion archer and a kid from an assassin family all in the same school...Too much for me to believe it'd be genuinely possible if such event were to be happening. It's a sloppy beginning.
It was neat ?u200d♂️?u200d♂️?u200d♂️ The synopsis will make you curious about what will happen and when you read it you'll wonder why the monster was in the sunset stables. I wonder what will the MC do ?? anyways, great start author ?