I've got no words. ... .. just kidding I've got a lot to sayI want this as a movie .praying to all deities existing that this becomes a movie??
Early review here. Looking at the prologue, the tone seemed quite dark. Fans of those types of stories would like this. Grammar is quite fine with only minor issues, though some words are somewhat hard to understand. Still very early, however, hope the author will improve as the chapters progress more. Keep it up!
Very interested in the worldbuilding and who/what we will meet as time goes on.Enjoying the ride so far and looking forward to where it goes next.Also this image sums up my feelings
amazing book. Hard to stop reading and one just have to know how the two wild and strong characters will move on in the story.
Just as good as Celestial Bloodline. The only difference being the writing quality in this story was good from the start2 stories. 2 Bangers
Hi guys so I'll need ur help with reviewing the book I promise to work on anything said
This is my first novel that I have written as an author and I hope that I can get helpful reviews and suggestions as I continue to improve on it
The book celebrates the strength it takes to move forward after life’s most difficult moments. Angela’s resilience and determination inspire us to face our challenges with courage and hope. The love story between Angela and Devin shows the power of connection and how the right people can bring out the best in each other, helping them heal and grow stronger together.
Alright, as the writer and not to sound biased but I sincerely urge you to give this book a read. I sense a lot of potential in it (well, why won't I after spending weeks of research lol) If you are a fan of demon, ghost and supernatural hunting as well as action, system, thriller and adventure, then you are at the right place. Although this might not be the Best book on the platform, I hope it's worth your click!!
Love it, so far.When there will be more?
Ok so I'm making this review of your novel all because I've been curious as to what it was like, first of all your grammar it's not bad but its also not great for example in some lines where you should be using past tense words you use their present tense, and the way your wrote his "system" was too long, and to be fair I was like that too when I first started writing you can correct that by breaking down his system instead of putting everything all at once, that's all tbh I made this cuz of your review on my novel a couple days ago and to be honest with you there's nothing wrong with my English and my novel isn't that bad, I just came back to writing after a whole year of taking a break so...
This is a very well put together story. It jumps right into the action and keeps its pace. It also hold perspective and concept very well. I do wish there was more detail, because I like getting a view of what's happening. But this takes nothing away from the great quality story we have here.