So this is my second novel and is (in my opinion) the better of the the two. Please give me feedback as to what you think about it and what you wish to see. I have also read many novels and know the basic concerns of many readers. If you any of you guys are wondering, my first novel is also in a state of incomplete and will be getting updated by me. However, I will be focusing on this novel more then my first. But if you would like to check it out, you can go to Wattpad and search for the book title, "The Lost Shadow
I have been reading this story from the very beginning. I wasn't too keen on it at first, but the writing became better and I started to enjoy it immensely. Keep up the great work Noona. I truly admire your talent.
You know the story is a good one when you read the prologue, know it isn't fantasy so you need to close the novel just to see the tags and pray that the tragedy tag is not there because you were already shipping the characters for their happy ending. At least this is what happened to me. (sadly, the tragedy tag is in this story)I think my rating says it all. From the prologue I was captivated, and each chapter is developed and described so perfectly that there it leaves the reviewer with just one word: AWESOME! Keep writing! I hope to read more about Marcus and Ayesha in the future (even if the prologue broke my heart into tiny pieces)
It's me the author. Looks how pathetic I'm write the review to myself. Well I just to make the review, so problaly someone can read it. You know probably my chance story to show up on your screen become bigger.By Author.Well I hope you can write the review for me
It's good, sometimes author misplaced details and in first chapter everything was compiled into a paragraph, but later on it was easy to read with good spacing although story was good from the start, but author should slow his growth as at 15 years he's called best player of valencia, which seems bit too much unrealistic. but i like the story, hope author continues it 300+ chapters
The novel is great. Well penned buddy. The you you describe everything is great and the story is pretty good and mysterious. Well done keep going
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The story so far is good but make sure the plot development is sturdy and not rushed in order to draw more readers. It would be good if MC was in his teenage years then met thor just like now in the avengers 1 fight together same as the current story line you have written
Back at it again with another review. Don’t want to say much aside from giving this book a try if you find the synopsis to your liking. Me out, peace! ✌️✌️
This story has a unique plot and I'm rooting for it. The protagonist is also relatable and I love the writer's sense of description. Keep writing and keep up the good work. You have the potential of becoming a great author.
This is truly a Hidden gem! I started read it since it first released and cannot stop until now.BUT, I just reliased that this gold, ranked 99++. Please translator. Put a note that say you need vote at every chapter. Please! I don't want you to drop this story. I will vote for you from now on!
A pretty good story I am excited for more to come hope you keep up the same pace like you are doing write now I like the pace, your plotting of the characters and Story line is very good, nice keeping me to read daily it's your talent hope you keep writing for US