KiritoAsuna0279
I never finished this novel because I got annoyed on how wordy it got after couple of hundreds chapters. For example they explain how fast his disciple during a battle. Then the author explains from the master point of view then he goes to explain from his opponent point of view. Then we need input from the audience and one of the audience's dog has chime in his thoughts. I get it, he is fuking fast...does this novel actually get better after chapter 200s?
Where are chapters 563 and 564?
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Love the series but info should be changed because it’s a bit confusing about gender leading to lesser view .at first I randomly chose thus series but now it has became one of my favourite series.... I truly loved it.But it’s a bit confusing that there are too much drastic changes in the present after our mc [VIRUS] comes to the past ; like people suddenly starts to get super power after the third volume. This is too much drasticbut nonetheless it’s a very fun to read.....
I stopped reading because the author started blowing the lid right open with the martial arts. Made the mc seem like the second coming, but in the end his civilization and strength only got up to rank D in some intergalactic competition where the rank A civilization could destroy planets. Wow, way to go destroying the mc ego.
this looks like harem? there are many annoying girls around mc.
Amazing story so far(ch 91) Reminds me a lot of famous novel Dual Cultivation. Though here mc is more egoistic, ruthless, decisive and hard to impress which i like it a lot☺️Starting 10 or so chs aren't too impressive but rather leave a bad impression with author's a bit too unique system and acceptance of female lead Eve of him and their relationship but story improves very much as it progresses packed with lot of action and cool stuff and ofcourse amazing hot scenes?
21 chapters read, overall good story, translation quality (3) is good as in grammar, but five great families of us not a thing (can be waved off as part of the fiction world), repeats already proven statements (might be an emphasize, but it gives more of a repetition effect then emphasize), and some other stuff.Good plot, nice system though ‘divine’ skills, not all deserve the title divine, but still good.Good story development (5).Background (4) build-up is good-ish.Updating stability(5)-probably will stay at 40 for long time thouCharacters (4)-Nice backgrounds for someEnjoyed reading :) (+1 in translation quality)
It's okay. The translation is just slightly better than MTL in some places which definitely hurts this novel. Fang Yuan, our main character is a pretty good guy for the most part. Give it a chance if you have nothing left to read. Not my kind of story but it might be right up your alley.
The story its not bad apart from a few things that should be changed the first its the stability of the releases its just too slow this story for sure its long but with this slow release after some time a lot of people would drop it
It is not the best but still good enough.Hope it get picked for translation.BTW does anyone know the raws?.........................................
Novel Idea. It's a novel idea. Why isn't everyone voting for this? Please people vote for the obvious cool ideas, not cliches or bad ideas...
