The author is here. Read and support the book please. Then I'll be able to write more chapters. Thanks in advance girbyour support and encouragement. God bless.
this gives me somuch dashavu I swear I read it before but it was the uther way around where the Mc was female with a male name and the mom was poisoned with a memory Thang that the Mc fixed
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I liked the cover so i said lets give this a try. Was i wrong for doing that:no i enjoy the novel:yes.Its an interesting concept of system base novel, but i also feel that the mc wants to grow further and be independent of it. To bad there arent more chapters yet.
I love the way you write fr. It's like everything is being narrated by a calm background voice and everything is so easy to picture. I genuinely love it and will keep on reading.
Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Well, here are my thoughts, my friends. Overall the story is quite good and gives you a pleasant experience. The Mc is not only smart but also has the strength to back it up. I can't wait to see him grow and fight a group of students of the hero academy.I hope this story continues because have a lot of potential to go over the hundreds of chapters. Keep up the good work.Praise to the all-mighty author
Honestly grammar is pretty bad, and could use better spacing, but overall it's pretty good. I would recommend this only if you're bored because it's kinda cliche tho.
Recommend this novel, as well as the other nov this author has written. They not to long like other but they are juicy with excitement.
I was generous enough to read the first 20 chapters. With most reviews the first 10 should already suffice as to not waste time. Anyway here's what I thought:Story Development (4/5): The author clearly has an overall picture of how he wants the story to pan out. The overall story arc seems interesting enough. This was the only reason I could bear to read so far. However, it could be so much better if the author weaved in background context and world-building to supplement the story arc. It helps the reader understand the pace of the story. World building/Background (2/5): Bland. The author doesn't care to elaborate on the world and we are tunnel-visioned to what the MC is doing. The author makes it hard to visualise the world and the context/connection between everything. The world so far feels like so instance-based. (E.g. MC is at point A then at point B). It makes it hard to judge the passage of time and the flow of the novel too. Also the author makes inconsistencies with details about characters and other stuff. Characters (2/5): Characters so far seem bland and 1 dimensional. MC has no defining features about himself. He is literally a kid with no aspirations who is average in life and has a mundane personality. An epitome of a blank canvas. Everyone else in the story has no defining context. They literally seem like faceless NPCs that are only there to trigger a storyline progression. Arthur is probably the only one in the story with some detailed background. However, this detail was mostly drawn upon from my previous understanding of Arthur in pop culture.Writing Quality (1/5): Bad. So many punctuation and grammatical errors. Numerous spelling mistakes and sometimes the author put the word novice where the MCs name should be (Novis). A lot of the paragraphs are convoluted and redundant and could be much more concise and fluid. The author clearly struggles sometimes in trying to express his vision. Although this may be an ******* novel site, if you are confident enough to have this published/shown on the internet then please EDIT YOUR WORK.
I think your writing is pretty good, just a couple of complaints and that is in the translation, confusing genders. I may suggest that you get an editor to assist you. I am at chapter 12 and the story line is very good. I sincerely hope you do not decide to drop the story.
I'm on the 4th chapter and just felt the need to say this. I LOVE IT!❤ You have writing skills and the story itself is compelling to me ? okay I'm going to continue