Do I have to say more, it's my fav Author with this special sequel novel. What is there not to like when I love the 1st story. Other readers, I highly recommend u read this as u will not regret it.
thanks for the great Novel author upon reading up to the latest chapter got me intrigue your story got an interesting background and potential to grow more I hope you kept on updating your story willingly I'm going to spend power stones and coins for this
A very good story with a engaging plot and a good pace. the situation of kage in academy I give you that excellent job but the descriptions can be improved other then that . it's a very good story
Weak world building.Lots of cliches.The MC's motivation is a travesty.Supposedly motivated by making money in the game, but he has never once actually tried to figure out making money.Has a part time job and that's supposed to support him and his 'non-biological sister' (yes... another sister not related by blood)He doesn't seem to have any angst over this once he starts playing, it's just tossed to the side as more women line up around the MC.Yes...it's another one of those where women are almost always good and men (aside from possibly the elderly and maybe little kids) are BAD.If it is going to be a harem then the author really needs to put that tag.Someone mentioned how the rules of this 'game' that had only been in existence for 4 years were being used on a MEDICAL EXAM?Yes you have to give the author room but you can't expect us to throw away our brains completely, you need to give a realistic reason or it is just not going to work.Works at a brick and mortar convenience store....that specializes in this virtual reality game? Doesn't seem to make a lot of sense unless it's just for marketing purposes I guess.You can expect to have to suspend your disbelief on a fantasy novel, but the logic still needs to be there.
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Well, I think it's okay, only read when free, and don't have anything to read again
Let start by saying I dinged the author on updating stability since its been a while since we have had any updates (between chp 292-293I suspect the author went on vacation but didn’t leave a note. That being said, this book is great. The character building is top notch. The fact that the MC has multiple personalities who talk to each other makes their arguments hilarious . Plus its used as a plot point to explain that while the MC is OP, he cant use all his power at the same time because his personalities are the ones that know how to use a particular power so his personality switches depending on the situation. Its like have 4 very different MCs in one. One is super shy yet blood thirsty to the point where he terrifies the others, one is cold and analytical , another is a flirt and con artist always looking for that next score or scam and then we have our normal hero.
The world building is cool. I love his mysterious master who’s a pervert that basically tortures him in the name of training. The biggest plus of this novel is the character development. You truly get a feel for what motivates the MC and all his companions. There is no harem(Thank God) although girls like him. I highly recommend this book. I have been trying to motivate the author by spending coins and voting for the book. Hopefully my dastardly plan works.
Sigh~ My reading pref. has dropped since I seldom in reading WN. I may offend many readers but I just want to express my true feelings for this story. Although the whole story is cliche it is worth trying. Btw, does anyone knows the raw?
I really love How the author devolps the story through fhe suspense and the plot is original well written and buld! Can’t wait to read more! Good job author! Love the style?
Hello guys the author here, thank you for reading this novel although english is not my forte i'll try my best, if there is a spelling error or an idea that you have you can put it down in the comment.it will be fun having a conversation with you guys regarding the plot.Likewise please vote and support me, thank you
I have liked all of your others works, this one is probably gonna be the best one if have a better update stability, but is still gonna be good with this rithyn
G'day friends! Here's a 5 section review for Flare's novel!Writing quality: Great writing. The grammar is good, and there aren't any spelling errors.Stability of updates: Batch released chapters as opposed to daily updates, which works for me!Story development: The story is developing slowly and with a lot of slice-of-life. The attention to detail is great, but the pacing is a lot slower than in most novels. Great for a slower read, but the excitement is a bit more spread out.Character design: The characters seem interesting, and have a lot of detail behind them. That said, a lot of characters are introduced very fast, (in the intro chapter) to the point that it is difficult to even tell which side they are fighting for. I'm sure that we will get to know the characters over time, but having so many new characters being named all at once was a bit confusing.World background: Has a lot of detail, and based off the end of the intro, there will probably be quite a lot of interesting stuff set up in the future!