Okay so the story is really interesting and the system is quite unique. I was a little disappointed with the synopsis because it really didn't do the story justice.Anyway, the mc was really well written and I love that the author had her flawed in a good way. Excited to see where this story goes.
I've read until the end and yes I will say this is too WILD, I wonder how the author wrote this story while maintaining his mind health bro? Really BAD WILD
Synopsis and the title are really interesting. The novel is also quite entertaining till now. .... hpflly it wll continue. The second novel that i really liked on this platform after A Demon's Journey.
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Pretty sweet start I must say! The story development seems good and the characters are well made and situated. Great Job author, looking forward to reading your book more!
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I read the first few chapters an i was like meh but i read more and i laughed until tears came out .But you should edit the first chaptes and write more about cultivation realms and thier level.Good job and keep writing
Hi author. Your story plot is amazing and intriguing. The readers who like to read system novels, this is totally for them . I could not find any grammar mistakes. As for the world background it is also nice. As its just the start all the best and keep writing
Amazing story! The writing is very,very good. ?????I like the world background and I love stardom stories!Keep up the good work! ????✨✨✨
This author always surprises me with her marvelous, well planned and executed stories. This time she has come up with a mysterious - thriller story which is not less than a drama series to me. Writing quality is excellent to me. Each and every word forces you to dive deep down in the story. When I read the chapters, it felt like I am inside the story so, you can see the author's skill to picturize the events. Mr. Herbew is the detective here who will solve the murder cases and believe me it makes me recall the series Sherlock Holmes?. The world background setting is done in a well planned manner and the way story is pacing is also good(neither too fast nor too slow). So, please without giving any second thought pick this gemstone book, add it into your libraries and enjoy reading it. Thank you author for coming up with such a story. Saranghae♥️
Best story I've ever read on this app. An actual realistic ish main character, who doesn't through the magic of a system turn into michael jordan in his rookie year. The main character, Hector actually fails and learns which is refreshing.
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