Great story, the world background and cultivation levels are not described yet, but the first few chaps are written wonderfully. No grammatical errors. I just don't like the luo something women, she is annoying as s***.
Out of mind, out of sight?This is messed up
I'm not likely able to keep reading, not because the story, writing, etc is bad but because it literally left me in tears. I read to try to escape from so much pain and darkness in reality. I've enjoyed other stories from this author as the author does an amazing job of world building and character development, but they're hard to read since I'm far more emotionally invested.
got your message! thank you for letting me know about your new book. this is my first time downloading the app, and it's for you. let me support you mary, for you have become not just an author i want to idolize but. more importantly, a friend. it's hard to find writers as talented and as humble as you are. i don't know if you hear this a lot. but talking with you even just online always make me smile. thank you for sharing your exceptional stories with us and for reaching out to mere readers like us.
I love this book. It's really interesting and kind of inspired me to work on an idea I've had floating about in my mind. The prologue catches your attention immediately, good work
This book is goodOne of the few books to have a main character using the light element but not darkness and fire????Author please don’t drop this
Actually, I can spot the writer's improvement in writing through the chapters. First, I really appreciate you trying to improve for the sake of getting a better read. Second, you developed a very unique style that kept me hooked to the story till the end. This is fresh, captivating, and promising. The plot is really exciting. I feel this has more plot twists and surprises to come. I'm looking forward for more!
it's is good till now mix of mystery and ghost, little bit of horror. waiting for new chapters. .
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I guess a Review is due, shameless author here. Story will follow our Dragon mc in his new life, this will mainly be for fans of the monster mc genre, I decided to start one as only god knows we need more of these. So ya, hope you guys will enjoy! Spirit stones and reviews are very much appreciated as always. -Simo
Just read the first chapters of this novel and I am already hooked on the Story. The Pasing is good, the character development is a little bit fast for my taste, the worldbuilding and interactions between characters are just great. Overall this novel is a 10/10
Btw English is not my native language
I can’t tell if the translation quality is bad or if this novel just uses weird terminology. I like the concept behind the cheat like ability’s but the execution of the novel leaves a lot to desire.