To be very honest the story in getting quite bland because till now it revolves around kingdom building and management of resources and their no major issues for the MC and no good fights but I hope the world building will be worth the time and I story will pickup the pace.
Man, I have been waiting for this novel to be translated. I hope the translator will stay strong to the end and complete this novel. So far the translation has been very good.
this novel is fantastic, there is no op mc, no repetitive face slapping, and a good mix of sci-fi and xianxa genres. MC's role is that of a teacher, he teaches his student.And his students create chaos bringing him fame.And the most important point there are no hard-to-pronounce Chinese names.
(This may be a long review)Story:Great! It's quite interesting and the war(s) are simply beautiful. The MC in the beginning (the few chapters) is cute and innocent, but you'll see her scheming mind very soon. The "acting to be godfather" is hilarious. I recommend the author to continue write the funny parts.Update pace:Pls update about 5 chapters a day...(๑′°︿°๑) XDXD nah, I'm joking. The pace is great, but sometimes I really want the author to update 1000000 chapters today...Characters:Nice and wholesome. The MC treats her people like family, and I love it. Some book's MC just use their people, but Ain cares so much for them (later on).overall:You'll never get bored by reading this. They're are funny and easy to understand, with unexpected events happening (The God damn WAR). I love it!
Writing Quality: 4/5Stability of Updates: 4/5Story Development: 3/5Character Design: 1/5World Background: 4/5This story is one of better written fanfics on this site and the system is easily understandable yet quite advanced compared to others while the storyline feels a little too much of a copy paste of original so far it's goodThe one and only problem for the story is a massive one, the mc is absolute trash, there's no redeeming qualities from him so far at ch34I really want to continue reading this but I can't, it's too frustrating seeing our mc having such a massive amount of resources available to him yet he acts like a fucking retard and fucks around and almost gets himself killed, let me guess, he'll look right into the basilisk eyes later just for the lols or something, that's how retarded he is, he threw a fucking rock cake on a troll and then proceeded to try to dodge the swings instead of you know actually using fucking magic
A história está muito boa,fora algumas inconsistências na história, está tudo muito bom,eu queria algumas dicas de histórias parecidas com essa por quê eu gostei muito dessa história
5/5 for the cover alone havent resd it yet but goes to library......... Bbbb b. Bbbbb. B b b.
Quite an interesting work. I've added it to my library and hope the author tries to write more eventful chapters...Thanks for the chapter!
Where this chapter........where this chapterWhere this chapterI wait. But none this chapter update.WoyyyyyyyyyyyyuyuuuyyyyyyyyyyyyyWhere this chapter..I wait for it.Come one author when you upload you chapter.
I really like the system aspect of the novel, being able to see others if they choose to let you. This makes it easier to understand the strength of people rather than having to guesstimate through fighting against opponents. I feel like in the beginning, the family was a bit too willing to take him in, they also didn't have any sort of prejudice despite him coming from nowhere and them being very noble and well established.
Such a Epic Story with realism. can't believe. this is so compelling. enjoyable!! too long to read ?. are more chapters are coming to this Epic??!
hello i am a biased writer and sorry for the long releases ill do more chapters when exams end for me______________________________________________________