more2x updates pls i love this story
In simple terms, this is a GREAT NOVEL, and needs more recognition.Now let's ddep dive...Pros:The world-building is pretty spot-on – not too complicated, not too simple.I love the MC's personality unpredictable yet intriguing.Side characters are well-fleshed out.I didn't spot any grammatical mistakes.The pacing is Just right!Cons:Occasionally, the descriptions of scenes are excessively lengthy.In very few cases MC's decisions/actions seem confusing and sudden(**spoiler **like how he killed Freya and the prostitute and Tiga) although that seems to be part of his personality but I hope they make sense down the line.My expectations:Mary, second most explored side character in terms of screen time, needs significant character development. The current Ren couldn't care less about the pain she caused the previous Ren. She's basically worth zilch to him as long as she's not in his way. Currently, she's just a hypocritical and narrow-minded character. But, if her character stays the same till the end, it's gonna feel like a waste of time. She'll end up as a brain-dead character not worth the time invested. Let's hope that doesn't happen! Her character arc should logically conclude, regardless of her eventual romantic choices.Whether this novel goes harem or not, it's cool either way. But every girl involved should get some solid character development, showing off what makes them unique and strong. Ren's relationships shouldn't just be for show.That's all for now...Great work author and ... DON'T DARE DROP
Nicely done work, I like it very much[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Shout out to the author for writing this novel. The settings, the characters, and the plot complement each other very well.
I thought it would be boring since the system wasn't overpowered, but I actually had fun reading the *normal* life that the system wanted for Amber.I am getting more interested now and I am excited for Regis and Amber to meet.PS. Please bring more updates.
I think it’s a great story I am disappointed it went the harem route but apart from that I like everything else. I suggest posting this story on other platforms to gain popularity, as the way it is currently set up even if people like the story they can’t justify paying for chapters as they would need to unlock close to a 1000 chapters, so it would increase your fan base if this story was in more platforms being read by more people whilst being more easily accessible without the pay wall
This is an excellent story. I just can't get enough!definitely worthy of my daily power stones!!!
The concept is good. The story is simple and straightforward almost like a children’s fairytale.
Now for the not so good bit:
The MC has the IQ of a doorknob and constantly whines besides getting everything anyone could ever wish for in the given setting. This bit gets repetitive and way too annoying.
Most of the MC’s vocabulary consists of the phrase “huh?!”.
The fights are ridiculous. A dozen apprentice level kids holding off a demon army while most of them are in a one on one situation while the mc ponders over moves and goes “huh?!” every time he sees anthing move.
The grammar is atrocious. This needs an editor.
Translation quality started good then turned to MTL+ garbage at around chapter 30.Which is a shame since I was quite looking forward to adding this to my daily reads...
INITIAL THOUGHTS:-As someone who has read over 2000 chapters of "Reaper of the Martial World" and also reading "Dimensional Descent" I am both biased towards seeing him in a good light and judging him harshly for what I don't like. With that being said I hope my review helps those who are on the fence about wanting to read this novel or not.WRITING QUALITY: 5/5-Having 2 other books being written he has got the writing quality down. It's on the same level if not better some of my favorite long-standing authors like "Cocooned Cow-True Martial World" and "Jing Wu Hen-Ancient Godly Monarch". Anyone who has been in this space for at least a couple of years has seen the influx of new authors causing quality to become sporadic like a heart rate monitor. Be at ease with this novel. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 5/5-Despite writing 3 books at once he has kept it consist which is what want we want most from our authors. This is assuming quality doesn't diminish which I stated before hasn't. STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5/5-Epic would be the shart answer yet I know you guys want to know why? Well based on the synopsis you can see the MC is starting off at the pinnacle of the Cultivation world which begs the question if you cant go up does that mean you go down? In this case yes you do. The very bottom at that.-Now here's where it can be a make it or break it for some readers. The 1st volume which sets the stage for the story is 30 odd chapters which can in some people's eyes be too much. Also, he doesn't exactly begin cultivating at the start of the second novel which can lead to some more people dropping off. So I ask readers to stay for at least 60 chapters before writing this book off as "boring" or other such nonsense. Great works are not made without a foundation that can handle the immensity of the task at hand.-By the end of the second novel and the beginning of the third where I'm at you see the foundation is really fleshed out. Much mystery is still there of course however you have enough to chew on keeping you wanting to devour this masterpiece some more!-Overall If you want quality story development then give at least read up to 60-80 chapters. You won't regret itCHARACTER DESIGN: 5/5-This is what I believe the author has gotten the handle of. I might not agree with his choices of character development, but that doesn't take away from the quality I read before my eyes.-The MC within the first volume starts off with many great qualities and some obvious flaws as well which leaves room for development. He has the best cultivation foundation one can ask for yet that is handicapped (temporarily) by one core aspect which would make it truly perfect. To compensate he delved into several side passions which is a pro. This however left his cultivation knowledge stunted which we see later on in volume 2.-The MC in the 2nd volume is becoming more aware of the flaws he has because of his overall circumstances. This leaves room for the MC to develop which is a plus.-The MC at the beginning of the 3fd novel is introduced to someone very important who for his own good ruthlessly shows him his glaring flaws and is someone who despite being born in the best clan actually in many ways is still immature and naive to the ways of the world. Who despite learning so much actually knows so little still. Hopefully, his coldness will be warmed to a degree by the recent edition of someone who shares a life with him now. It's been noted he was once warmer yet due to hardships he got colder and harder. Now if he could rediscover that warmth while keeping the cold that would be fantastic!-Other than the MC's his family is well developed and others close to him as well. After volume 1 we have yet to see many characters stay with the MC. Only one for now if any more at all will join considering his cold personality.WORLD BACKGROUND: 5/5-Very detailed throughout so far without needlessly dumping info on you. This for many authors is a challenge. How much is too much info? How much does the situation call upon to explain the situation in clarity while leaving some mystery? This author has it down once again.OVERALL: 5/5Read it or regret it. Let that sink in!!
while the story does take the usual route of OP MC stories and rebirth webnovels, I appreciate the setting of the story, the willingness to stay true to what the characters would really do, and a fresh perspective from the eyes of a dragon.
First of all this is a great novel and I will continue to read it. That being said my following criticism should be seen as constructive and not judgemental or destructive.1. Forgetable/Mobs characters receive to much words and in certain cases their traits and mannerisms becomes indistinguishable from the main character. The way the writer writes dialogue further exacerbates this, making it hard for readers to distinguish between characters - especially during dialogue.2. The MC becomes aware of knowledge that he should not be aware of. This can be easily fixed by simply indicating that he is not aware of this and that this is the knowledge of the future MC bleeding into he’s own recounts of his past, because technically the MC is writing his own story about his past self. The author is fixing this in later chapters.Those two points are my bigest criticisms.
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It's so good, I stopped being a lurker.
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