the covenant church and persistent asthma is it up and persistent and already carrying a chapter of acts of kindness for a dream I have a few questions
The is pretty good considering how many novel like this have the same genre of choices system and how the author takes on how to run a business is pretty good and I like how the MC is not super smart but not an idiot as well. Overall it has a good potential hope this gets picks cause I like business genre novel.
interesting
writing would be average but author likes to fool around.The grammar has many faults, wrong prepositions, common mistakes, typos, use random word when he is mind draws a blank to replace, using copy&pasteThe author did not bother to explain many things, unused skill books, idle system has army building purpose, inefficient system, does not have system store to sell surplus items, confusion.i could name many more things.This gets worse as it progresses
By far one of the best stories I've read on this app while the story is a little rough at first by the time you get to chapters 50-60 it gets addictive Devon is an amazing main character and the background of the world is filled with mystery that makes the story stand out and the development is also very good and the updates are very consistent and sometimes the author is even nice enough to throw in some extras. I'm very excited to see what is in store in the future for Devon's adventure and all the mysteries to finally come to light. The only negative thing I can say about this story is the grammar mistakes that are made but that will get better with time. I heavily recommend this story to everyone and hope to see it to its end
hey author and new readers seeking to read this novel, I ll give you a pros and cons of the novel. pros :- 1.the plot is interesting, intelligent. to better make yall understand, you can compare the plot type with the type of plot world apocalypse online has and the ancient genes. 2. the power system is unique and author explained it well. easily understandable and exciting. 3. side characters have a proper role and are growing, mc's backing does a proper job of backing him rather than in some novels where mc has to leave cuz he cant bring his backing into trouble. 4.the writing is fun. author has inserted humour in between. and he knows how to hype.cons :- 1. the story is incredibly slow. 2. mc's power development is near negligible. although he has such a good legacy, as you've seen in majority of comments and I ll mention it too, I hv read it to around 350 chps and MC. is. still. VERY. weak. Unlike WAO and the ancient genes, mc's power development is too slow, even this far into story he is just on 2nd level of the whole power system. at almost every big fight you ll see him say I am weak I am weak and still not do anything to improve it. you ll see him berate himself as being weak almost throughout the story, I admit his origins are strong and his system is strong too, but he legit never bothers strengthening himself. 3. there are actions after actions. just like WAO, you ll see yourself exhausted just by reading it due to continuos action.
Fantastic read that i kinda regret bing reading but the detailing In both the Battles and Smur is freaking great gove it a try for a good read! ?✨
He's back disgusting little obedient grandson with no semblance of a connection too the modern world. He has no ambition, and pledges his life to this random master of his like a real c!nt pushover. He doesn't deserve a system. Dropping.This mc isn't worth reading about.
Well, so far so good of the reboot, I still like the original more, but that's probably because I enjoyed the 451 chapters of it.And by the way, there will be no betrayal by close one's in this reboot, right? Because if that's the case I'll just stop reading it right away. I stopped reading ATG because of that
Such a sweet book ??... It truly is well written and is wrapped up really well ... Simply beautiful ❤??... Sweet and short the perfect way for any work
First thing first, i only read up till' the 35 chapter. So, i can't say much. Every thing is great and has a lot of potential (it is too fast-paced for me though). Two things that irked me the most are the forced comedy and Jezzebeth's death. The forced comedy you can read it for yourself and see, it's not that bad though. The author don't give Jezze much screen time, and that sucks. When she died, we get some flashbacks of her time with the Mc. Like, if the author spend more time with her. Fleshing her out, giving her more life. The death would've been more impactful for us readers. The quality of the story would've been up a notch. I just hate characters with good potential get snuffed too early without shining.
Its very nice the mc is thankfully not an idiot, the pace is steady all I can say is that it's good.