I wanted to give this a chance because it sounded like it cool story. However the character conversations were hard to follow. It was all in a single paragraph and it made it hard to determine who was saying what. If that was fixed I would try to read again. I stopped before chapter 1 ended.
Amazing book. Expecting an update soon.
Nice storyline author... keep it up
Very good book. Love, Romance, Jealousy, family feud the whole shebang. very great read just needs editing because of grammatical errors but otherwise it keeps you wondering what's going to happen next.
Alisha is svage as hell
Three short stories. Books are complete with endings. 3rd book needs editing. The team name and owner changes a couple times. Definitely worth reading. Very Steamy and descriptive scenes.
I can tell you are an excellent writer. I’m hooked on the way you describe each scene, but sometimes I feel like you over describe things and it makes me want to skip some part, but still I’m looking forward to reading more of this story.
This book is completed under a different title by the author. It is called, The Mafia Kidnapped Me.
Excellent story. It could use a little editing but that is it. I loved the plot and all of the little twists it took. Could have used some punishment for the mom and sisters but it leaves you to wonder about how bitter they are. Overall it is a great story well worth the read. BRAVO AUTHOR!!!
next chapter please. very nice story. can't wait for the next chapter.
was there an issue on plagiarism .that this book was completed abruptly?
I agree with ChosenChildOfCreation that the tags can be a bit misleading; it starts off as a comedy but shifts to a more serious and dramatic tone over time.
It’s not an original story and shares similarities with at least two other Yuri novels I’ve read.
[Spoiler] The "God is behind this" setting, with its miracles and supernatural themes, adds an interesting layer.
However, it’s still a good read. If you don’t mind the quirky humor in the first 50 or so chapters and the transition to a more serious tone as the Yuri relationship develops, you’ll likely enjoy it.
A bonus is that the "male lead" in the novel she enters turns out to be a decent guy once you get to know him (rather than being the typical bad guy).
, I think it’s a good story.