slightly different, but still interesting. good character development, even a little bit slow but that's okay. need more world background, hoping for more in next chapters. great job author, keep it up. thank you.
Great novel please dont drop if you have to just step back and think for a month or 2 just please dont drop it its a great vampire to me it ranks 1st in vampire genre....... [#1im a vampire god?!]........ [#2 evil goddess system]
FINALLY we have a good novel with PLOT from this author...this novel has a well balanced scenes of fighting & r-18 & romance & cultivation...Its also about a reincarnated of great sword master who will do anything to become stronger so no one can bully or look down on him...Mc still is acting immature and not thinking with his brain but his lower body sometimes ...And considering this author is already writing 3 novels at once, the release rate of this novel is good.But recently i feel author is trying to put this novel on drama route...But in my opinion it's a well written novel which has worth spending time over it.
I am certain that nobody reads these trial reads before it gets to us because this is just unreadable and I'm once again stunned by how professional Webnovel is. This is like a really bad MTL at best. Rubbish. 0/5.
A virtual reality novel like this is nicely written, as the characters is quite lively, bringing life to this book. And I think with a little more polishing, this can become quite popular !Here are some issues I want to point out however:1. Grammar: Among some of the grammatical errors were misplaced commas, which created run-on sentences; incorrect verb tenses, which should be past tense due to the way you write most of the verbs, and a few misspellings. Additionally, while correct, I found some sections of the sentence to be redundant ( example from chapter 2– “His friend’s reaction was so strange that he even thought about taking him to a detoxification clinic for help because that reaction was too abnormal.” [ ‘so strange’ & ‘too abnormal’ mean the same thing in this sentence, resulting in redundancy. So I would recommend taking out one or the other ] )Reason why I am saying this is because readers should have a good, first impression of your book. Hopefully my comments may assist you in your journey !2. Info dump: While I personally don’t mind, I do appreciate when writers can spread out information evenly in the chapter without massive info being placed out in front of me. It makes it easier to digest. While info about the game is perfectly fine, I believe the part about the quartet’s appearances could be segmented to when they appear in the story, so that I don’t have to go back to imagine how they look like.Overall, I think this has potential, but it only depends on you, Author.So keep up the good work !
Website : qidian chinaViews : 24.54millionRating : 8.9 (295)Chapters : 1050Status : ongoing Word count : 2.22millionauthor level : lv5 No of works : 2Disscussion : 4721Year started : 2018Chinese title : 落地一把98K
Very well written and thought out concept. I thought it would be about a guy who got constantly cucked in life, but sometimes being cucked has advantages ?
While I do like this kind of novel you can tell the author is bad about desperately trying to reach a word count. For example they will make a statement about the effects on a weapon and then make the same statement 4 or 5 more times as if to emphasize their point.
Truthfully the story is very interesting, they have an original plot (at least in my opinion). But the quality of the translation is just trash.. If they could translate it better it would get a solid 4 star but the translation.. If I can give the translation quality zero star I would but I couldn't. Well at least the quality is now better than what it was at the earlier chapters. Though still sh*t quality
Although the reviews for this novel isnt good, but most of the reason are the fact that the planet in his dantian (or smth) only has chinese people in It. Well to be honest, i think that this type of setup is is pretty good because of several reasons. One of them being language barrier. considering that the mc is chinese and isnt well versed in other languages. arguably, the language barrier isnt really a problem as they could just translate it but perhaps the author havent consider that. I couldnt really call it racism as well. the planet only has chinese but the planet isnt even our planet earth. most of the time i just treat the inhabitants living in that planet in the human category and giving them no race and whatsoever. Most of the wuxia novel world are also only with chinese people so i dont really know whats the difference. The story is pretty good if you get over the “racism” definitely give it a try.(Dont judge the story based on race)
interesting
Story is quite good. System where the ML gets rewards after every kill or after he imprisoned someone. Translation is horrible. MTL might be better.