SInce I've already read quite a decent amount of chapters, my opinions finally compelled in one. The book is good, no doubts — system is realized pretty well! Interesting to read, as well as the writing quality is fluent and easy-to-understand. I took the time to read some good systemic novels, so for people who love those genres, this is a gem.
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This a rare gem. The story concept while familiar finds it's self being unique not just in concept, but in story tellingWhat other story sends you in past before building into the future.
I have somewhat mixed feelings about this novel. This novel had a great idea, and for the most part the plot was pretty good. However a few things didn't make much sense.
So first off, the main character. He has lived in the void for trillions of years. It was stated his lost his sanity and regained his sanity multiple times. Putting aside the fact that humans trapped in a void for trillions of years would likely never regain their sanity, when he gets out of the void is where the problems start. When the main character eventually is reincarnated as a human, despite what was mentioned previously he still has quite a bit of emotions. He is not really a "cold calculating" as initially described, he is empathetic but kills to get to his goals. The problem with this, he has literally lived in the void for a indeterminate amount of eons, and has zero emotional defects? I'm at chapter 72, and he quite frankly has perfect sanity, with no emotional defects. Which, again, makes no sense.
As for the side characters? We have antagonist #1 - 10, and useless girl who stays by the main character's side #1 and #2. He keeps a annoying energy parasite next to him for no good reason, despite it endangering him quite a bit.
Also, as much as I love unforgiving worlds where the main character barely survives, this just isn't it. Literally everyone the main character meets trys to kill him at some point, it's kinda exhausting to read. I swear theres large swaths of people who will try and kill him just for the giggles.
The plot in general kinda sucks. The main character wants to learn how to use mana more efficiently, so instead of taking the short way to go to the mages association to learn, he takes the long way. (He could've revealed he has a mana core to be taken there straight away, but instead he didn't and now has to walk 5000 miles across various places with next to 0% survival rate.) Why did he do this? Because it might give too much attention to him. Which I personally find laughable, considering how much attention he has gotten so far, I doubt revealing a mana core will change anything.
Furthermore, the writing quality is sub-par, even for this site. Theres a lot of run-on sentences and a ridiculous amount of grammatical errors. Grammarly could've fixed the majority of mistakes. The conversations the main character has are kind of awkward, I can't really anyone actually saying this without being extremely cringy.
Overall, a good idea, and it had a good plot outline, but failed the execution miserably. Writing quality, story development, and character design fall short. World background is only average.
Story good, translation lackluster.
This book is actually good, when someone tries to push him around or something it gets em back hard. A some girls tried to turn everyone against him and he just killed them, ruthless mc but doesn’ murder random people. Thinks no logically and uses his brain.
I mean so far it’s just another urban parallel world where the Mc just copy’s all the famous novels on Webnovel. So it’s kind of dull atm, but who knows maybe he’ll branch out and copy other industries in the future.?
Author better make charlotte main girl or fave consequences ~ regards from charlotte simp
I'll just give it 4 stars cause it's kinda good but I cant wait for the MC to become op even though your still new at least it's readable so it's still considered good
Slow Slow slow Slow pace, weak mc well not my cup of tea, but anyway still five star cause everything else is ok.. so if you r into mc who is strugling,weak with good potential, snail pace And well written (no grammar mistake) story well here you go you gonna Enjoy this but for me thats it i am out...
I LOVE IT! I love stories about pets similar to this!!!! PLEASE I WANT THIS STORY TO CONTINUE!!!!! I like how each pets is distinct and evolves. I jusf wish for more info for other monsters but what it has rught now works just fine.
It's better than the fire novel, at least.I like funny, overpowered stories.There aren't really any inconsistencies, per se. The author just doesn't understand how literally anything works.He says a company worth 150 billion is small, and just starting. I understand different currencies exist, but it's still a bit weird since a massive company is only worth 350 billion.He forgets and changes usd to yuan later on for a bounty.The MC has a great golden finger, but it's super shallow. I wrote a joke when it finally happened, but it seemed like anything said about the MC became true. But only if it was good. When he gets called fat, nothing happens.Also, he magically has a perfect memory outside of the Golden finger. I'd be okay with that, except it literally is such an easy scene for him to get that from his golden finger, that it feels stupid. He's already basically a perfect guy even before the golden finger, according to the author. (Not the old reincarnation, the new one.) 95/100 looks, genius, great memory, good personality. Just needs to work out a bit. The author doesn't understand hacking at all, so him writing about it is annoying. If rather it was a fantasy world so I didn't have to care.Other characters didn't seem to have very unique personalities at all. I don't remember any great comedy, only cringe from cliche.This premise makes for a good comedy or face slapping novel, at best. But that's really not what this is.At least, the closest to that is when he claims to easily be able to cook a steak.I don't think I even know anyone who can't cook a steak. Technology makes it easy.Anyway, it's an okay book overall, but nothing special.