I feel so betrayed. In the beginning of the story the author depicts a fantastic character who doesn't seem to involve in being lustful Pig or tied down by any sort of companionship. It felt like a man against the world is trying his best to survive to grow stronger to Triumph. The setup for the Apocalypse had me waiting for the Mythos oh, but then he added Sofia. At first I thought he's going to handle it properly were is this going to be a short a Ally until they parted ways. But then it turns the classic light novel Horror Story of girl teases guy but in the most annoying way possible you hate the girl you want her gone but the guy endearing towards her and they had some sort of fake love that blossoms and makes you want to tear your eyes out. The story which had such a good start and idea, was destroyed to the point where it's unrecognizable. Please understand that if you read this book you will not be getting the quality characters that you seem to be promised in the beginning. You see his first companion die you think the author has balls. But it seems like they are cut off by someone halfway through the beginning. I would not suggest to read whatsoever! Also please read through the other comments hidden between the 12 year olds who don't know what actual relationship should be like are negative comments you point out the faults in the story. This isn't a complaint this is a warning do not waste your precious time to grow attached to a character who will be destroyed in the most gruesome way an author can!!!!!
The story development is not bad same with the Charakters but the grammar is hard to read with the story switching from „me perspective „ to 3rd person . As well as sentences that repeat themself .You can give this one a try but if you can’t handle the grammar then you should just drop it .
Story pacing is way too slow.MC comes fully equiped with leadership qualities while he is a loner and hasn't been in a situation where he was required to lead.Too many side characters that its impossible to get a sense of connection with everyone, which would cause the story attention to be divided thus aggravating the pacing problem.
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when will there be more this is so good I need to know what happens next please give more I need it this is almost like berserk plz give more we need it????
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This is my second review after reading through all the available chapters (38).First of all, this novel is amazing. I rarely give 5 stars but this novel deserved it. I won't dive into the plot much but what started off with a simple game of soccer went as far as an alien invasion. The pacing was good for the most part and the grammar was good, not perfect but good enough. I can hardly wait for more. Really hope the author would continue to pump out more chapters regularly. Thank you author for creating this wonderful novel and thank you, the reader, who's checking this out for reading this review XD. Gooday!
love it. There is so much world and character development and the fight are like reading an anime fight......................................................
Very dissapointing, trash tamer novels that get picked over actual quality...all your gona get is word count chapters, dragged story and sudden cliques.