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Not a bad overall read. It’s slightly similar to AFK, just with a slightly less standoffish protagonist, modern setting, and not as OP system. As for the neighbor, she was only in the story for one chapter really — the only lengthy interaction they had was when Qi Shu saved her from a wolf that had found its way into their neighborhood. I don’t know what other people were reading, but it was a perfectly normal scene. Do give it a try.
I remember reading a similar story to this in the past was much better with a indian mc named dustin desaan or something who becomes chosen of the speed force it was much better then this as its barely readable. lets also not forget this is locked chapter wise as a fan fiction which is illegal as you are referencing dc an leaves you open to a lawsuit you can do a speedester in any supernatural world without it using places from trademarked comics etc
after he killed off the smith Im gonna give this novel a pass. if you like dark and greedy mc this is the novel for you. overall the story is good but not for everyone.
Lin family again ok very cool but, what's with the so many 'Please become the laziest god ever' systems? do nothing but obtain a lot of different stuff, getting tired of them.
I like how author is allowing the MC to have a genuine head start but now I would like it if he can maintain the gender of all the characters. please ?
good premisse, had potential, it's well written. however, out of nowhere it got confirmed that it is a cultivation novel, people saying "mortals"and don't even get started with the stupid logic of tiered cities, I mean has a lambo and a gigantic villa,but it sucks because it's from a low grade city? so in the big cities are all the houses made of gold? do they fly? what are hey made of? and the hidden cultivation families. .. . meh I thought it was going to be a urban fantasy with mild superpowers like hero academia, just more hidden, but it's not at all.
from a first look, it's an extremely familiar overall worldscape (vr capsules, haptic feedback for training purposes, time dilation, a weak MC who flukes out, etc), however the author fleshed those out in rather intriguing ways, the only downside, I'm guessing the author isn't confident in English and for some reason doesn't use any grammar or spellchecker features, which I can almost guarantee will break any immersion the intrigue built up... that said, I was hooked until 150 and that's only because the author clearly and obviously hasn't realised that's an earlier chapter... which worries me because people were reading it before me and apparently they didn't notice...
Great novel. It’s really well written and the lanugage and descriptions are just amazing. Few novels have such an advanced way of writing as this one on the app. Great story. Keep up the good work!
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A story about a clueless reincarnated god that enters a game which is basically another world and gains an item made by his past life(God Version) and, unknowingly, works toward regaining his true self by completing the broken artifact made by his past life.Basically, if you have read [Shura's Wrath], this is it's brother novel.
Nice premise no swordsman BS but a hunter instead. Completely ruined by the games P2W mechanics that author has ingeniously used to turn an VRMMO into a generic mobile game. MC motivation in gaming is to make money to pay off depts. Within the free chapters he has completed 2 hidden quest and special scenario boss and several material request no one else could fulfill. He has barely made enough money to pay for his expenses in the game. The most basic of things cost absolutely retarded amounts of gold which the only way to properly farm is apparently by buying it with real money. His class most basic abilities are locked behind a slot machine system that requires real money to operate. He has learned no production skills what so ever despite the absolutely retarded cost of arrows/traps/pet food these basic items that his class needs. He has spent 60000+ of dollars just on the stuff his class needs while constantly remarking how he is envious of the rich big shots. He has a cheat that gives him knowledge no one else has access to and yet even with that he has made no progress to even paying of the monthly fees of the dept. Chinese microtransaction gaming culture taken to level where it actually ruins the entire novel. Who cares about the characters? Or the world? Or the story? When every fúcking chapter is MC inserting a credit card just to barely be able to function properly in-game...