Very great start to the book. Very amazingly written can’t wait to read more. Would definitely recommend reading this book. ????
Wow, this chapter really took the tension up a notch! Ada’s excitement about finally having enough money, only for her brother to ruin everything, made my heart ache for her. Stephen is such a frustrating character, and yet I can feel Ada’s love for him despite his recklessness. The way the author builds suspense—starting with the uneasy phone call to Ada’s realization that something is very wrong—was masterful. The descriptions of the club, the intimidating bouncers, and the high-class atmosphere contrasted so well with Ada’s struggles. And then that cliffhanger? Now I HAVE to keep reading!
It is my first novel I read the awesome horror aspect and a good plot for a beginning novel I can't wait for the next chapter to release
One of the best novels i have read but one thing I can tell is that they need to stop depending on the system so much and be a bit more efficient than what we are looking at
Sincerely, I'm falling head over heels for this bookI'm in love with the characters alreadywe'll done writer ❤️?
Yippie!! it's out am glad it is yall should read this i can't wait to get into it(god i sound like such a fucking bot ;w;)
Something gives different vibes from the story. I read all free chapters. Not bad for a new Story. But you should make it bit bigger. I hope later parts are as good as the ones I read.
I'm not the biggest sup of the MC but except for that, a really well written Story with a big World Background!
Just started reading but will give it a try
Your story is a captivating tale that left me spellbound and yearning for more
it's a good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it
my first book on webnovel and it's very nice