nice i love this book, can't wait to read more of the chapters. It will be fun to continue and I'll love to read to the end
Alur ceritanya sangat bagus, karakternya sangat kuat, pembaruannya rutin. Secara keseluruhan novelnya bagus untuk dibaca. Saya membacanya setiap hari.Tetap update setiap hari. Terima kasih
good story.................................................................................................................................................really a good story.................................................................................................................................................
I like this novel a lot. Having common sense in a cultivation world seens like is a lot more op than the MC plot armor in itself hahahha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LBL COME BACKKKKKKITS BEEN YEARSYOU CANT JUST WRITE THINGS LIKE THIS AND LEAVEEEEJust one chap a year im beggingAt least drop character designs so I can draw up my own fanart to sate my cravings-
Good start, like the direction and the background. Gives lots of plot room and not your typical story. Not an idiot MC and a system of sorts that actually helps. Looking forward to more
If you don't play lol don't read this novel, although it is a promising novel the system is based on lol and it's champions if you don't know the game or how to play forget about reading the novel.
Good plot. The suspenseful reveal of the characters was very engaging. I wish to read more, hence I am very excited. More power to the author. Greater inspiration!
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Good Job ............... I love ur story. The English was pretty good for me, I'm pretty understand for what u want tell. I hope you will write the story become much better. And keep the story up to date though.
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Exceptional writing, looking forward to the ongoing story and development of characters and settings. Will check back weekly for sure for updates.