This is so cool!!!!!
Very interesting read and quite a bit new and different story line. Refreshing!
Beware of slow updates.
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Love these characters!! Cannot wait to see how all the little stories are tied up….especially May and Levi’s.
nice plot,keep it up
?? I like this, good read
The novel is something I can't describe, sometimes you like it too much and sometimes it gets boring too much.
So one can only read and judge oneself if this is for him/her.
O updates, where are you?
She is also stupid?️??️
I just finished reading it, gotta say, for my first fanfic novel its quite good. Although I have some complain about its rushed ending its pretty okay I suppose. I just hoped there would be an after-story on how he develops his relationship with the prospect girls and the future when he retires and takes care of his children and harem.
I'd say 7/10+1 because its my first fanfic and will use it as a standard.
I'm going to writing my thoughts on the book at certain points there will be no spoilers so read if you want.
The section I will be reviewing is ch 0 to 100
Characters/character development: 9.5/10
Plot: 8/10
World building: 7.5/10
Imagery: 8/10
Enjoyment: 9/10
Overall: 8.5/10