I enjoy reading this novel it’s nice I like alway like bl novel and this is interesting with even a key but why don’t you update daily?and even it’s not fast pace so it’s really good and I like it waiting for more updates ❤️?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
"Hello everyone! I'm the author of this novel, and I want to start by expressing my heartfelt gratitude to all the readers who have taken the time to read my work. As a new writer, I'm still learning the ropes and figuring things out. I appreciate your patience and understanding as I continue to grow and improve. Feel free to ask me any questions you may have, and I'll do my best to respond!"
Five star review? Wow I flatter myself. I am giving my work a five star review not just because I can but because I know how hard I worked to put this book out here and maintain consistency. So many times I have thought of dropping this book due to multiple incidents In my personal life but the encouragement and engagement of my readers make me keep on pushing forward. I thank you for being consistent and keeping up with me on this journey. I will do my best not to disappoint. Thank you!Also I’ll be answering any question under this this review.
Good story premise and good pacing, quite easy to understand . I like it
this is the first time i read an idiot omniscient lol.
Good pacing and good character development going on so far. Will definitely be reading more
Overall, it wants to be good and I applaud this for trying something different. It feels like someone watched the original Blade Runner and then added some Ghost in the Shell to it.The Good: I like a dark, gritty, science fiction setting such as this. This is not a child's novel, but it is still a familar power-building scifi novel. We have some excellent character descriptions in most cases and the world itself appears interesting.The Bad: The writing quality and word choices in some of the earlier chapters is awful. A simple grammar check would've gotten most of them. (For example: Using bombarded as a noun when it should've been bombardment in multiple cases.) It's trying to be dark and gritty at times and pulls this off well, but sometimes it is taken too far and just gets weird for me. This is purely subjective so I can't really bash it for that. The 18+ scene was... alright. It needs something more or maybe more build-up. Maybe I'm just getting old so it could work for others.The Neutral: Not much to say. The author appears to have experience setting up a good story, but the grammar just needs a bit of help. The story seemed to escalate very quickly up to chapter 9 so I am not sure if this will be a long story or not. Keep it up, though! I'm enjoying it!
It seems fun and has potential. This truly feels like a great start to a novel with evil MC. Since the start of chapter 2 there are already signs of mystery and the world that MC might have stumbled upon.... well can't say more than this... Blablabla...Wordwordoword... countcount count
the idea is good but the novel became unbearable as I read deeper. I mean, he's the master of Fate, yet all he ever did was focus on martial arts. I literally skipped the entire Martial Arts Exams Whatever. If he wanted to be a martial artkist, he could've chosen a better roleplay not Master of Fate
The world building is amazing. Right from chapter 2, I knew I had to keep this book. Go author
I give you 5star for your great idea ?. Have a good luck and I hope you to keep the story. ..... ... ..... .. .. ....... ..... . ..... ...... ... .. .. .... M.. .... . .. .. . . .... ... .. . . . ...... ..... . ... .. .. .
This is the best ROTK fan fic ever!!I can't explain in much detail so I'm just gonna give you guys my very honest and simple opinion from chapter 1 to the latest chapter which I stated above, it's a level higher from another ROTK fanfic Three Kingdoms: God-Level Choice System (it's dropped) but if you didn't think so and you read ROTK fanfic that is good please give me the name please and I'll read it ( I just love ROTK fanfics so much)