The story is okay, but honestly, i dont like the fl. Haha.
Read this 3 years ago story was well written but it's too d*mn easy for mc n ml. Most female was written as wicked and Villainess characters.in the past I like this so much but after read more novel I feel this shet since all female labels as bad chick
God, I found this piece from The Perfect Run comment section. I finished The Perfect Run, but I am not yet ready to move on, it was so perfect and it left a huge void in my heart
This book is great, but since each chapter is 25 chapters, it sometimes freezes my phone and does weird stuff
Okay! I know who it is know. Is it Shangguan LingRan?
It's a good start and the grammar isn't too bad. The chapters are a decent length and the ending of the first chapter does make you want to keep reading. It tends to Tell vs Show quite a bit, but that's easy to fix and should resolve as the author really gets into the heads/mannerisms of their characters.
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Now this is really interesting. author is there anyone in this novel who isn't evil. literally iam even suspecting his father true thoughts at this point.
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l like everything about this book it's realistic . if you have not read it better try l det you will enjoy
Why does the audio no longer work chp 21