fatgamer
Some people might think that withholding information from the reader, in what it feels like every chapter, is interesting and gives a sense of mystery. Although the author explains some things in a chapter there are always more things that are left unexplained. I think its nice in the first 30-40 chapters but after that it ends up tiresome and boring and that, imo , hurts the novel which seems to have great potential.
Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic. Hey webnovel when are you translating the new novel from the author of the legendary mechanic.
Hey readers, this is the Author but you probably already knew that from the 'Author' tag in front of my name.This review is to give you a quick and fairly important rundown of my novel and not just as an excuse to rate myself 5 stars *wink*, so here goes...The MC, Hal, is a little irrational at the beginning but please blame this on the fact that he is in a new environment and believes he is trying to get a feel of the 'place'...so to speak.Also in the beginning, (Spoiler alert!) he tends to unlock new abilities just in time to save his life from stupid situations he put himself in (This is only in the first twenty chapters. more or less). This is my fault and I did not realise that it was recurring until a reader brought it to my attention.-All this faults are only really in the first few chapters and if you can please stick with it. it does get better and you might actually like them (the early chapters) as well.They are quite interesting If you like or can overlook those minor details. I was still new at the time but I am way better now.so please, .give my novel a try and be a tad bit nice in your comments and reviews. XD.-*Phew*Now that I've got that off my chest, I invite you to read and Enjoy this novel of mine.-(Spoiler Alert) It's awesome.
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Long ass title. CheckOver used words including but not limited to,DragonLegendaryGodTime and SpaceDestructionHeavenly OverlordCauldron. CheckThe imperfect number 9. CheckThis story has what it takes to join the ranks of cliche harem novel.
700+ chapters in, and the highly anticipated identity revealed never occured. Translation drop badly around ch 450+. I just continue reading the raws just for the single, identity reveal and hoping the romance between FMC and MC to blossom. The series got dragged out too much with the plot of "Kill the son, brought out the father, kill the father, brought out the ancestor". Literally everyone knew how powerful and op MC was, except the FMC. Not really worth it to read after chapter 400+, not worth it
this is actually great, like 9/10 and one of the best trial novels that have come out in the last month or so. i highly recommended.????????
I loved this book. It’s amazing. It captured my attention and I just really yearn to see the male splint of view and hear of his past. He’s such a captivating character. He’s mysterious and funny. You can see he cares even if everyone else struggles to. I love it. I hope to hear more about it.
Don't read this novel, let alone read the unlocked chapters..Because you will definitely regret it, because MC is 1000% slave of the system. Your brain will be damaged reading this ?????????
one of the best novel i have readMAIN CHARACTER IS LAZY AND AND MORE LAZY THAN ANYBODY HERE ON EARTH.... ...............?i recommend reading it
I like reading the comments and reviews more. Specially on how our author here defends himself. I do say for sure he has blind confidence about his work. But please remember Mr. Author, not everyone can be pleased easily. As for the ones who gave their own opinions and reviews, please do remember that the author is writing this story/web novel using his own limited ideas/mind/brain, heck he might even be dreaming scenes for his story in his sleep before writing them. Amateur authors/writers are different from real authors/writers, most writers/authors are even graduate in these kind of fields, meaning they are already a master of their own craft, they even probably spend a lot time just to study (includes: higher English lv, grammar expert, story chart/flow etc... ) before writing their own work. Real expert writers will finish a volume of their work first, then spend a lot of time reviewing it and editing before posting them or publishing. Very different from most amateurs. **: I am looking forward for more roasting. Xd
what is the time period for a new chapter to be updated
