The re write is way better than the first one Hope you keep writing this way
"Save it for after we deal with this mob! I wish Ver was here, she could gulp them all down or kill them with an explosion or something. Ryuu could too, but she never uses explosion magic for some reason" (Mae)
Miray stopped and turned to Nene, "is it my father?" her eyes widened as she asked the question.
"You wouldn't be so bold as to do that."
XIUMIN; Please come back
Kim then gathered his mana and the earth shone brilliantly. He could feel like he was one with the earth. He rose both his arms upwards and tow giant hand made emerged from the earth appearing beside the colliding force. The hands closing into each other to contain the ferocious mana. The hands were trembling trying to go against the force that was resisting its way.
I got confused angered looks from everyone, but we just kept walking. When the time came for us to split paths. Oneka-senpai turned and looked at me right in the eye.
You mean if i want to be the Count...
Game of cat n mouse starts..lets see who wins..love this
She detached herself from him, they looked at each others' eyes for a long time before she broke out in small tears and ran away unsteadily. Alan did not say anything but looked at her distancing back, a line of tear also rolled down by his cheek. For some reason, he felt like this was going to be his last time seeing her.
Tail lies on the ground a bit, her bells ringing. "Hand please." Millie reaches one hand down and lifts Tail not only to her feet but briefly off the ground with one hand. "Thanks." She pulls up and rebuckels her pants.
It was almost as if he was giving her the "What-the- heck" face.