Don't get me wrong guys. Im not obsess to him. But I think its getting there. Just kidding.
Cloud was no stranger to hunting but from his past experience since he enter the black tide forest have made him a little unsure if he could manage it, Cloud took a moment trying to compose himself it surprised him how much hear was within him so much fear that even the idea of hunting left him feeling cold sweat. While Cloud was busy thinking a soft voice said "you will never be strong if you keep letting what happened in the past stop you from doing something dangerous, you should view your past failure as a learning experience and don't ever let fear stop you from doing something because you never truly know that you can do something until you do it".
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To his surprise, she blushed about three different shades of red and took a few quick, short steps back from him. "Uh," She said awkwardly, "I'm really very flattered, your highness, but I take my job very seriously. Something like this would be inappropriate."
For we all know it is easy to turn from good and light to the bad and darkness, but it is rare for the bad and darkness to turn to good in which lies the light.
"Hey Alya! Do you know where I placed my Fairy Tail manga collection?!" Naomi yelped across the apartment, hoping for a positive answer.
"Open up." He did, as wide as he could, and closed his eyes as soon as the tip slid inside his mouth, doing his best to stay still as he didn't get clear instructions about moving. The member was hardening with each passing second and he felt the need to swallow before it hit the back of his throat, saliva sliding down his chin. "Good boy. I want to fuck your mouth, baby. Is that okay?"
"Yeah, umm, I meant, like... Leviathan?" asks Junior Contractor.
Beerus:that's sad story mortal
Me:good
The people of the other factions looked at Bai Heng with dazed expressions while commenting intensely.
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: I saw "Don't read this story. It's not worth your time." as the synopsis, I would only use something along similar lines if you dropped the novel, and then you should include the word dropped somewhere in the synopsis. Also, if you did drop the novel, I'd suggest publishing a new chapter saying such then deleting all the other chapters due to how short the story is as is. Two months is too long for a web novel unless on hiatus, and then such should be made clear.;,;. The plot felt slow, I am not really sure what to say about that though.;,;.Positive Feedback: Your world building is progressing at a good rate in comparison to your plot, and I really like the character development.Personal Feedback: I thought the story was too slow. I can see that there is a decent plot coming together, but I still can't begin to see the next milestone due to the lack of speed, thus I will not be continuing this story.