Ah I see... a fellow nepali on this community.Well, as we're from the same country, it's only natural to support another author here.Good Luck!?
"Minami no hanashi: Yume" is a slow-paced story in its first part (the Prelude), which aims to properly set the scene and discover the different facets of the characters. The story is divided into three volumes: "Prelude" - "Adagio" - "Finale".At the time of writing, "Prélude" is entirely finished (31 chapters). Right now, we're writing "Adagio
I can relate to the MC... because I too was banished from my party as the shield hero nyahahah. Another masterpiece from the author, an automatic addition to my fine collection.
this is something where I'd only read the free chapters but nothing more, I know sometimes you get tired and don't wanna right things out fully, but still using "ur" or "u" to replace "your" or "you're" is awful, it shows a lack of interest and effort in a story. I think if you could write down your ideas and then slowly form them into one single thought. This would be good. but right now, it feels like a 6 years old just rambling on about one of their fantasy's skipping from idea to another. Also, the power scaling is horrendous. he already reached rank one at just 18 chapters in and can suddenly move at the speed of light. Make sure you edit it. Don't just post right after writing it. Actually, read your stuff out loud so you don't sound like a 6 year old.
I'm obsessed with iti really love the book so much.
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The field is littered with gore, blood and abandoned swords. Red, black and brown are the new colors of what was once a tranquil, grassy hill, which has now become the stage of a terrible battle.
seeing how Daniel's guard was perfect after his constant advance John decided to lure him in with a opening to is right but to his surprise Daniel's punches were faster then he anticipated and John took a lose to his right shoulder . seeing that his tactics did not work John moved back making distance between him and Daniel , he thought Daniel would pursue him since he held a upper hand but to his surprise Daniel did not. unlike boxing , close combat is not a gentlemanly sport with rules so the opponents weren't just restricted to their fists they could make use of every part of their and opponents body. so, as John created a distance between him and Daniel he wanted to ambush perusing Daniel with a upper kick but unknown to him Daniel had already know of his kick boxing proficiency with his card ability and did not fall for John's trap.
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As the night closes with the hero's dream begging the legend of the cursed hero finally begins let world tremble at his fury and let his loved ones rest in eternal peace and prosperity at the cost of his childhood and innocents.
But he was quickly caught in a bearhug, Naruto's arms squeezing him hard enough that Ultron could feel his fresh body straining not to break from the pressure.
If you are looking for a sweet romantic story then sorry to disappoint you but you are at wrong platform........