The story is actually very good. It’s a humorous take on ‘cringey’ self-insert OCs you’d make up as kids with OP powers and skills. The main character’s horror at his own ‘cringey’ behavior and his constant internal dialogue really ties it together in a way that’s fun and kinda new. The world builing is really intricate and nice too.However THIS version of the novel unreadable. At first I noticed the lack of apostrophes and was like “no big deal, I can infer the proper words no issue” but then I realized that along with apostrophes there were absolutely no QUOTATION MARKS TO DENOTE DIALOGUE.There are so many lines you can’t distinguish from narration, inner dialogue, and spoken due to the casual tone of the novel making it basically impossible to read without giving yourself a headache.Really a shame, I had originally read over 200+ chapters of this story and was looking forward to finally reading the ending.
I see "kingdom building" TAG and I will support the book ..................................................
Shameless self-reviews are the thing now so here goes, I guess. Ask me anything in the comments below. But...The creatures and classes in Black Magus are both loosely inspired by D&D but have been altered by me to make something unique. In all, I have twelve sagas/seasons/volumes outlined. Currently on Vol 3, 3rd Arc.The MC, Amun, is a half-drow with sorcerery that's loosely based off sung jin-woo's ability from SL. And while he is a necromancer, Amun will have a focus on cursing and making deals with souls like the devil he is.The story starts slow, not really kicking off until after the academy. But once Amun graduates, the story will quickly pick up speed.Things you won't read about: Harems. XP to level up. Hard stats. Skill points. A dumb mc. People who do things just because. Mary Sue's/Gary Stu's.Things you will read about: War. Intrigue/Espionage. History. Kingdom building. Exploration. Cults. Relgions. Transformations/Evolutions. Science/Inventing. A small bit of romance. Turning into a 'villain.' Drugs.
What a breath of fresh air this master piece is! The author does a great job in using descriptive language, it's as if I'm actually watching the events unfold instead of just reading, please keep writing, I look forward to more chapters
Hello author here, this is my very first story pretty much ever in my life never written before. So please let me know what you think of it even, even if it’s bad I do not mind. Thank you and enjoy.
just read and try it out.. you won't regret it ???❤️
This author is super versatile. He can write about business, action, and even football really well. I loved how the football scenes were written—they were exciting and fun to read!However, there are moments when the pacing drags, and some plot points feel a bit rushed. It would be great to see a little more depth in certain areas. That said, I think he should write three more books, especially a football one. He really knows how to make those scenes come alive. If you enjoy stories that mix different genres, give this series a shot!
I love this story and would like to encourage the author to continue I have seen tons of good novels and authors quit half way pleas do not quit and continue this master piece
The novel is easy to read. Been observing for a while and the updates are everyday!I love that the characters weren't written to be perfect, instead they are reaching for perfection as the novel goes on. It's quite a realistic novel filled with educative parts, lots of comedy, emotions, POVs, flashbacks, real life experiences and how to overcome challenges. Learnt a lot so far and laughed till I spilled my drink!
The story is catchy and I like the way the characters are developed, it's a good job.
"Issei Hyoudou, you're in big trouble you're coming with us" Tsubaki ordered authoritatively with a cold glare much to everyone's shock Issei followed without a complaint.
Before we go on. There are several levels of humans.