Rubbish. First few chapters and there are already inconsistencies and signs of padding for word count.Translation is somewhere between average to bad, characters are not described and the world background is generic xianxia.
The author struck a perfect balance needed for a story with an OP MC! Carnage and gore is a huge theme and no side character is safe! So the MC is a lich (aka the peak of op-ness), but the secondary character, the one with enough potential to have been a main character in something more classic, is a boy named Ryan. This kid has it all: A rare darkness affinity, undead teacher, coincidental encounters with every major character, a romantic love interest. Basically, he's the epicenter of the plot. However, setting it from the perspective of the Lich removed clicheness and offered far more perspective. I love the way this is being done.Furthermore, I really love how the magic system is so intuitive! Nothing is explained in an info dump yet I completely understand! We can just skip all that boring stuff and go right to the CARNAGE!!!!Oh yeah! Every minor character seems like a legit person that could develop into a major character or villain (even though they are usually ground into meat paste in the next sentence). Hahaha!WARNINGS:-copious amounts of blood and gore-1 r*pe scene-horses getting killed by pocket-nukeThis might be the 2nd best review I've ever given. Hidden gem indeed. The only problem I have is that the POV switches are more conducive to an update schedule and not a binge like what I just did.
it is pretty good.................................it is pretty good.................................it is pretty good.................................
Well, the story was nice as well the system was good but like always, the system disappears after the initial few chapters.I am not sure when it will return. And this is the case for most of the novels with money making systems.
was interesting but too bad its a fake op mc and possibly a harem as well
Well first 19 chapters are not bad.But the mc too money oriented.With his ability it should only be his small goal.So first 19 chapters are ok but i'm not sure if the others be ok or not in the future and if i will be ok with mc personality....For now i will read more for sure.
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I loved the story and progression and just all of it right until volume 3 started, pretty much a 10 chapter info dump where the author seems to completely change the story. Like i said, loved it till there, do with that what you will, but that is where i will be stopping.
This story is good, however, i havent seen any reviews really criticizing anything, so ill have to do it myself.First, the author seems to enjoy wasting time rambling needlessly for chapters on end. A simple trimp from a village to the academy took like 20 chapters for no reason, it could have been handled within 5.Second, i noticed that he attempts to make the MC appear smart in the initial chapters but it just comes across as forced and makes the MC look dumber because his “smarts” are common sense lol (BUT because it was the initial chapters ima let that slide)Third, once again coming back to the authors rambling. Each action and even that take place do NOT need to be 5-10 chapters long lol, not ever event is that important and shouldnt be drawn out for the word count.Fourth, (just a pet peeve of mine) i feel that the MC is very naive for no reason. Like not in the normal sense of the word but hes very easily influenced?? If that makes sense. Like, he sees some man fly, and freaks out and starts “respecting him” (even though this dude literally met GOD 5 seconds ago) I dont know it is just weird, this kind of stuff happens a lot. (Anyways, loving the story so far author, hope you dont do anything so outrageous that i end up dropping, youd be suprised how many times that happens)
Wait a minute, I'm confused. In chapter 27 (DUSK) dr. Norton was already aware that Pelosi got his Lunar Republic after his snarky supercomputer told him. But in chapter 34 (GHOST), he hopes Pelosi gets his Republic...isn't this a plot hole?
This story about war and something that you have to find it !Good luck
Great work author. The storyline is captive and unique. The world-building just blew my mind. The characters are designed well. Nothing but a good book. If u r wondering whether to read it or not...just go for it.All the best author. ❤️