What an intimate father and son chapter, hopefully we’ll see more of Little Yifu teaching Chang Geng about what it means to be an adult, the nice way
After looking around on the nett for some spoilers, i desided to just quit now, got to chapter 24 read from people you can just skip the 30 firsy chapters as they got nothing to do with the story or the future of this novel, worst is the dude just keeps getting used by women it seems lol and turns into a retard when it comes to relationships and so on, so all in all this is it for me.
C128I can't with dis.Like, the premise is good, and the idea is interesting, but the translation ! Ugh!!I can't even read with all the brackets, and the internal monologues and regular narrations are all mixed up without any distinctions. I always have to try and make sense of what I'm reading, and it's frustrating me to no end. I just want to read a good story man
Comment as episode 50.
Worth reading. There are some beautiful places but some places are very arrogant. There are very silly fighting parts, especially in that part, it is very shallow to make nonsense review.
Also, the dialogue is very wrong, sometimes there is an ambiguous place between the two conversations, it is not clear whether person A or person B is speaking.
chapters are also slow.
a novel with potential I hope its potential is shown
great story the only thing that i really hate about it is the word witch that you use instead of which.
I like reading thus one and I hope tgey picked it up . Even though he has a good fingEr he has to work to masters it which I like instead of suddenly becoming uber powerful.
this has been my fav. novel in this genre for a long time. It has a lot of things i love about it but restrain myself and write about a few here.
first the theme. there are hundreds of wuxia novels coming out every year, but most just feel like a wish fulfilment or just not practical. like a random guy just walks to a king and badmouths him. now how in the world is that practical in this world? this novel has the most authentic feel to it.
then there are the characters. good i love these characters. again most novels could replace their characters with 2d figures but we wont feel a thing. but not this one. the feel like real people that live in an old chinese feudal lord system world. the characters dont feel and act like petty teenagers throughout their lives.
then the story itself. it uses a lot of cliches. not gonna lie. but it uses them is such a good manner that its a plus. it made me second guess, triple guess every single little thing even after it was confirmed which in other novels would have been obvious from the start. this is what made me keep reading the story.
lastly the depth and philosophy. some people criticise it for it. they call it flowery language and nothing else. i'd say it re-sparked my love for poetry. for some 400-500 chapters straight it had 1-3 mentions/ references from famous ancient chinese poems and literature. sometimes it indeed went a bit too far in it but in other parts it dropped some poster worthy lines and different takes on matters that you usually dont often see(well again some criticise it for doing this saying it makes it needlessly complicated or that its not an original thought. well, I don't expect a single author to come up with all of that in the first place. whats presented to us is a bit from all over the Chinese history and philosophy and not being read in the Chinese classics it was still somewhat new to me and i guess for a lot of other readers). another thing to add, it sometimes just doesn't lay out the facts verbose and you actually have to understand what you are reading. like, after talking to a lot of people in the comments and forms i realised a lot of them didnt even realise when they(the mc and female lead) had ***. other novels hipe it up so much and here it wasn't even directly mentioned, just a casual 1-2 liner remark that didn't even say it directly.
then there is the rant about the female lead being a *****. i mean comeon? is see? seriously? no. the family did go overboard(but by wuxia standards not overboard at all) but the female lead even made sacrifices for his sake when she practically didn't even know him! just to uphold his honour(btw for what reason? just cuz her grandfather in his senile years gifted her as a symbol of gratitude?) she went against her own sect and people who she considered her brothers. she was THE freaking princess of the most powerful nation goddammit. and she still did all those things cuz she felt she owed him that much( whether she did or not i know for certain i wouldn't be able to go through with it).
It’s very hard to read since the translations are bad but the story and characters are very good so I don’t mind the translations that much but I hope it gets better.
Raw plzzz
please
The grammar has its issue but overall the story is great. I'd appreciate if the author improved his writing but apart from that am rooting for this book, added to my library.
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This is is great so far and I hope you don’t drop so fast f you like this story I found another one like it it’s called everybody likes big chest and it’s about a mimic taking over the world one bite trap at a time