The storyline ...️...
There's so much happening beneath the surface of this text. The dowry isn't just money—it's Shen Qingyuan's independence, her only asset in a world where women have almost no power. When she demands it back, she's not just reclaiming silver, she's reclaiming her agency. The hairpin she snatches from Granny Li's head is symbolic too—it's something she owned, something personal, worn by the woman who oppressed her. Taking it back is a small but powerful act of reclamation. Then there's the severance document itself. In a society where a married woman's identity is tied to her husband's family, choosing to cut those ties is revolutionary. She's literally rewriting her social existence. The three children represent something deeper too—they're not just future villains as the system calls them, they're symbols of broken family structures. Dabao and Erbao's hostility, Sanya's quiet observation—they've been failed by every adult around them. Shen Qingyuan, who was also failed by the original host, is now choosing to be different. The system's pork reward is interesting symbolically as well. In a world of scarcity, food represents survival. The system is giving her the means to keep these children alive, which ties into the larger theme of chosen family versus blood family. The Shen family's dysfunction mirrors the Zhao family's dysfunction—both are families that claim to love but actually exploit. Shen Qingyuan is trying to break that cycle, one poisoned relationship at a time.
Always triggered by this type of main character (MC). Too arrogant. He comes from a normal, struggling family and was originally talentless, but because of the 'cheat,' his ego inflates, and he becomes increasingly arrogant. For example, during his first official power test at the martial hall, when the person before him scores quite well (by normal standards), he dismisses it with an attitude like, "Just like that? How weak." He starts judging people based on their current strength rather than their effort. This attitude is disgusting.
He also becomes rash and shows off his newfound might, such as during a training camp where he destroys property to prove how 'mighty' he is. It's cringeworthy. The MC becomes overpowered too quickly, with repetitive and boring training sequences, like dreaming while checking his 'future' status or endings. The premise is good and quite fresh—using future technology to check his future self—but the execution is poor. The story becomes a monotonous, linear narrative focused solely on the MC. "I am so great, so mighty. I will train! Only I can save the world!" This mindset reflects the arrogance of a pubescent kid who thinks they are the greatest in the world, the messiah, and the only one who can make a difference.
Really fun story.
I was rather skeptical of it, thinking it'd be the common trash on NU, but I was pleasantly surprised.
There aren't enough chapters at the moment to make a conclusive judgment on the quality of the story so far, so I'll update the review when there's more to go by.
I wasn't planning on reviewing this. But seeing the ridiculous review of Suijin that didn't even read one chapter and instead reviewed the story based on the summary, I had to at least leave a positive review so others can experience this fun story too.
I'm hooked and eagerly awaiting new chapters.
P.S. Suijin, a modern man obviously knows what a card system is. You'd know this if you read the first 3 chapters.
I adore this! The FL is both stunning and astute; she's relatable without being overly powerful. The ML exudes coolness, but beneath his composed demeanor lies a genuine heart. The slow-burning romance provides a welcome change from the typical instant-love stories. If you're seeking a tale featuring captivating, intellectually sharp, and humorous protagonists, along with a healthy love development, this is the perfect choice for you!
This is my initial experience reading a crime novel, and occasionally, scientific details threw me off a bit as they were unfamiliar (prompting me to re-read for clarification). I wonder if the author possessed a specific background or perhaps had friends in the scientific field. Regardless, I commend the author for their meticulousness in describing the crime scene; the flow was smooth and easy to follow. Kudos to the translator as well – although there were occasional typos and idiomatic expressions that didn't quite translate perfectly (given the complexity of the genre), I've been following the translation from the Angel Blog. While I might refer to the original text when the translation is unclear, the overall translation is still more accessible. Thank you to whoever translated this engaging story!
"For me, it's a refreshing change from the typical revenge stories I've come across. This one isn't overly violent, and the protagonist displays a more level-headed approach to seeking justice, not driven solely by blind rage."
It seems you're sharing your thoughts on a novel, highlighting several issues you found. Here's a rewritten version in English:
I'm having difficulty crafting a review due to the numerous flaws I encountered in the book. First, the lack of world-building is disappointing. The novel fails to establish a clear context for the [Game Elements, Level System, and Dungeons]. There's minimal information about the world's state, like how it changed after the sudden appearance of dungeons, or the societal norms and laws. The focus on the main character overshadows these crucial aspects, without providing subtle details to immerse us in the world.
Additionally, the title is misleading. The claim of "Not Being Restricted by the Dungeon Rules" is misleading, as the protagonist exploits a loophole rather than truly breaking free from limitations. His growth pattern, referred to as "Accelerated Growth," loses its impact when he aims for the top, and the unpredictable nature of new dungeons hampers his progress.
The "Awakening of My Incompetence Skill" also falls short. While the first two awakenings are reasonable, the third conditional power lacks value, and some skills have inconvenient activation requirements or exorbitant costs, making them appear underpowered.
Lastly, the plot feels overly reliant on clichéd "shounen" tropes, particularly plot armor, which allows the protagonist to overcome challenges with unwarranted ease, often in an unrealistic and cringe-worthy manner. This aspect detracts from the novel's uniqueness.
In summary, while there might have been potential in the title, the execution of the story and character development leave much to be desired. It's difficult to find genuine uniqueness within the book's current framework.
dang not care about woman i am in
I jumped when it said his birthday was March 8th- since thats my birthday too. Scared me for a second there XD
Of children. ?
Martial world was my first novel that I read and that's when my passion for novels began, Li Ming is simply inexplicable and absurd as a protagonist, the MC is very cool.