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A brother from the same nation deserves a good rating, i hope you won't stop your novel as we strive to complete our novels! For the c-word!
Do you know how confident I am in my writing for a somewhat fan-fic? Mad confident. Like even if my writing was a level lower, it would still be much better than more than half of the original works/fan-fictions.Stability? Pffft. If I can't think of something original, there is always that cliche plot which most people seem to find as a guilty pleasure, so you'll be fine!Story development? Lol please, read the first chapter and tell me do you get the usual flashback of the "I met God by dying on the way home by truck-kun and yadadada," no. ?STRAIGHT?TO?THE?POINT?Character Design! Mindless Harem? Ew, I'd rather go watch some hentai or something. But I love the arrogant young master cliche though, let's be real here, face-smacking is gold.World Background. Let me tell you this, ?CULTIVATION?NOVEL?Yeah, you already know there will be multiple worlds and I promise you, I will do my serious best to make it seem realistic, fantasy-wise of course, so you can picture things better.
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To begin, I find the synopsis quite well defined and gives the overall idea of what the novel is about. Chapters length is quite long but has the capability to hook the reader till the end. The actions between the dialogues are depicted nicely and the dialogues are well written. The characters are unique.Overall, A perfect read. Looking forward to read more chapters ?
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Writing quality is something that I should consider as a 'master piece ' . It's literally too good. But updates r not stable. Do hope that author will sort that issue out. Am gonna to be permanent reader. Nice job Author.
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While vampire stories are not my favorite or even prefered genre, the story is quite good and very intriguing. There are some small granmar issues and the dialogue sometimes feels forced and unnatural. But its nothing granmarly cant fix. The flow of the story is really good and I can already imagine the epic adventure about to happen!
Woah! I just came here for a review swap, didn't think I'd be interested!Firstly, as an author, I like your writing style alot! It's more detailed than I can ever be.Just a tiny flaw, your sentences are slightly off, structure wise, but it's getting better!Also, this is my favorite genre, so I'm adding this to my library! Thanks!
Dog roasting fish in the forest filled with spirit beastNice ?? idea and implementationVery interestingNo cringe power up from the start
Good book enjoying reading it so far hope it keeps getting better so far so good it's kept me entertained and distracted which is something that I need right now