Zero: Lord of the Dark Element - Reviews

" Kill her chenz !" The taller man rubbed his chest where she kicked him his eyes burning with smug satisfaction..

[Nah.. Nah.. Kau lumayan hebat juga. Kau menolak kendali ilusiku kah?]

Ever since being created after the mass loss of brain cells during Rachel's teenage years, they were looked down upon. They were the reincarnation of the cells who decided it was good to fill the head with cringe dances.

Just Sweet Novel. Two Yandere lovers. If you have read or watched Mobseka (Trapped in a dating Sim) , it's similar in starting but with Better MC. Only problem is Chapters are small and we need more chapters atleast 400 more.

Sounds interesting, I am looking forward to updates? Liked the authors other book.

“Your novel is a work of art that truly deserves appreciation! The characters are enjoyable and complex, and you are able to paint a fantastical world filled with details that transport the reader to new dimensions. The atmosphere you create in each chapter makes the reader feel as if they are living within this world. The plot is exciting and fast-paced, with events unfolding naturally, capturing the reader’s attention at every moment. The writing style is flexible and smooth, making it easy to dive into the depths of the story. There is a philosophical depth and new dimensions in the narrative that make every part of it meaningful. Without a doubt, this novel will leave a strong impact on the reader.”

The world build is great in my opinion . Keep it up, looking forward to next chapters

First Impression Review :I only read 10 chapters, I know. but...Although the world development and other staff are good, there are some incoherency with character's characteristics, like, some minutes ago Misty thinks of MC as a kid, but the next moment out of nowhere she starts feeling lovey-dovey towards MC like a lover.And this is the reason that made me lose my interest in this novel.I think, at least for Starting, "Bad Luck System" was better than this novel, although that novel was not perfect, i wanted more chapters of that novel.