You're my destiny! - Reviews

"No, I'm fine. I've got Rivalz. And Shirley and Nina stick close to me when Rivalz can't be there. It's not like my assailants are particularly dangerous. They're just jealous school girls. I'm sure you've seen them in Pendragon. Did you know that last night here in Area Eleven, you were voted both sexiest man and most eligible bachelor by one of the talk shows?"

She just stared at me before finally asking the question that I've been waiting for, the question in which I wonder if my answer was an excuse or a reason.

And all that glitters is gold

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Great story, ladies get in here and read! One thing to complain though I was really expecting the mafia boss to say, "You're breaking your mother Heart!" or something like that, either way, it's still good!

I would say, I agree to the whole comments. The amount of details and vivid description is insane! This definitely got me hook. I just read the chapter 1 and I can't wait to read more. Please everyone give this a try!