From my perspective, your story has a strong foundation with its classic hero’s journey setup. Kevin’s role as the chosen Four Swords Master gives the story a sense of destiny and responsibility, which can be compelling if developed well. However, the novel could benefit from more polished writing and deeper world-building. The pacing should allow readers to connect with Kevin’s struggles and victories rather than rushing through key moments. Additionally, expanding on the lore behind the Four Swords Master could add more depth to the story. Overall, it’s a promising concept, but its impact depends on execution. Don't worry author, don't be pressure on what I said, cause I also need to improve with mine, just want to point out and help someone I know who also need to stand out through his/her work. You deserve such, as you also work hard in your passions and creation. Keep up, your wonderful work, author!
