This was certainly something……. There were so many different issues. To list one of them. Author or translator was too lazy to figure out how western names are. They should have never translated the names. The naming sense is ridiculous “white Vivian”. Also this story is pretty confusing and the way people talk is extremely weird. This needs an editor.
author should really read his script before uploading since there are at least 100 wrong name usages and level correction needed that you can easily become irritated by the time you reach 20th chapter
I'm actually being generous, this novel is like it was written by a 10 year old. You can barely read it and it's like a copy of all the novel's of the same type. but worse, the author needs an editor so that this novel can be slightly readable.
The story itself shows lots of promise... The execution of the story is poor. Many opportunities for good storytelling go ignored or get glossed over. If this is taken as a rough draft and got rewritten it has the potential to be a really good story. Just not in the state that it's in.
