Wish Breaker: The Battlemage Academy - Reviews

15 years later, Hei- Ran had grown into a beautiful young lady, to top it all, she was the most beautiful in the Western Empire, she was the pride of her family and also that of the entire kingdom, her intelligence, bravery added to her beauty and of course her loving character. After a long feud with the Southern Empire, the Western Empire's Emperor decided to make peace deal with the Southern Empire, that day, all the streets were decorated and the royal palace looked magnificent. The Emperor invited all his dukes and their family to the banquet after the peace deal, he wanted to impress the Southern Empire's royal family with the beautiful Hei Ran.

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Luke:.... uhhh this going to be tough. So how long till we get there?

Gohan:this here is goku

For there was at one time a goddess so lovely, that each man yearned for her. She had turned into each man's fantasy and dream alike, overpowering, charming, brilliant. Such characteristics could make a man distraught and even a solitary look caused wild desire for her and just her, exploiting people who succumbed to her, would twist to her each word, turning into her unceasing slave.

"Please..."

"As long as I go back with you, will you let them go?"

"Let's shove his body under a wreck and then collapse it. Then we'll clean up the blood."

"And then you have the nerve to act as if the people you have turned just for your own benefit owe you loyalty in return. And if some of them rebel against you and break away, you call them Stray Devils - hunt them down and kill them, calling them monsters and a threat to humans and Devils alike... conveniently ignoring that they only became like that because ofyou."There was still no trace of anger or unrest in his voice. He was speaking like he was talking about the weather. And somehow this made his hostile words even more frightening.

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I honestly can't wait to see how this story unfolds. So far, the main characters seem to be tolerating each other enough, I hope they're end game. They're so different, yet so connected in some way. Fingers crossed.?

Shameless author review here! Had to drop those 5 stars somehow. Anyway, if you’ve got theories, questions, or just feel like chatting about the story, hit me up. I’m always lurking around.