WiraCandraTirtha Sang Akalamis - Reviews

Before Hestia could say anything though, a large lightning bolt ten times larger than a normal one exploded at the top of the mountain. The two looked over as five more bolts of lightning shot down over the mountain, shaking the ground, each as powerful as the last.

"Holy shit Sky, that was some flying."

"The third line will be slightly farther apart from the second line. The two mages will be in this line with two of the Porters. The porters doing this will be the only two E-Rank ones."

I understand everything now. May dahilan kung bakit hindi pinakilala nila Mama sa akin ang tunay kong pamilya. Kung bakit 'di nila ako kailanman pinadikit sa pamilyang Ferragni. The Del Montes were just trying to protect me from Ferragni clan lalo na't kilalang makapangyarihan na pamilya. Naging sapat na sa akin na malaman kung saan ako nagmula. Ngayon ay 'di na ako naghahangad pa ng ibang bagay. Natakpan na ang butas sa puso ko. Napunan na ng pagkukulang na ilang taon ko ring hinahangad.

"He's…he's coming," Xavier forced out between wails.

"I'm here to challenge the gym" said Lawrence

I love this story so far. I can’t wait to see where it’s headed. The characters are great. The story line is great. The only thing that I would change is how often it is updated. It says 1 chapter per week but we don’t even get that. In that respect it seems like we have to wait forever for things to happen. If something is going on that the author can’t update as often as they would like to then I wish they would just post a little note like other authors do to give us a heads up we will be waiting for other chapters. We don’t need to know the reasons just give us a little side note. Hope the story picks up again.

Your novel has potential, though there are only 3 chapters for now, I hope you can upload more soon, I would definitely recommend it to anyone.....