Nice book with a promising start, the system's arrival was slightly different than what I've mostly seen but it only makes it better and have me anticipating its origins and capabilities. Although the English is good and not unbearable like other MTLs works on the platform, there's still room for improvement. Keep up the good work. ?
Whoa!! This line up batch sure is strong, look. Even mother nest give them strong name. Mother nest never fail, it scan our energy and give based name based on equals of that. Hey, look at that newbie. He got no horn, he is super weak. Since our strength is count based on the number of our horns and it size. One inch is normal for newborn and our king which is strongest have ten horn with twenty inch long. Lest see what name he have.
It’s good overall, the background, the world building and the relationships, I Am waiting for more chapters, then I’ll make a seconf review on the story
Speaking of being trapped in a game, it reminds me of SAO, okay, forget about that, your story is really good man, I'm a little curious about the Kasil Hale entity, I'll read more later, but keep fighting buddy.
