Whispers of the throne - Reviews

*BANG*

Zayn slammed his hands on the glass table and with a bang threw the picture crystal frames, "Why didn't the good outweigh the bad! I was there- the entire time," He shouted, "I saw her- I saw how she felt. She couldn't have 'faked' that!"

I was aware that the Aedon Citadel and the Temples were still existent. Why? Hihi, it was very simple, I am a direct descendant of Orcus and a member of Orcus Familia. I am proud that I possessed the pure Magus from Pluto.

Just then, Dev entered the room, which surprised Bhumi, who asked, "Are you looking for something?"

Koan parried another strike, then another, making sure to push his wrists a bit higher. After parrying another attack, his palm landed on her chest (on her boobs) and he pulled back once more.

The Asian woman that kicked him did not follow him, but there are other demons that were just as scary, that were making sure that the line was intact. Some were short and red, those had whips to hurt the souls, some breathed fire, some shot poisonous needles, etc.

"Hahah! We are invincible, we are undefeatable, we are immorral, we are the great Undead! Hahaha!" Hatchan, Bartolomeo, and even Alexander are singing and dancing with crossed shoulders.

They turned around only to discover the dwarf grinning at them with all his friends, Sig' remembered the words of Morgana and kept quiet.

I tell Daphia that Irelia and me will going out. Ririel and Meth said they prefer to stay with Daphia. Irelia bring me to stable using other route to avoid attraction from public. Arrived to the carriage. She just titled her head because our carrier look different. I just opened the door and this is make her surprised.

The story is intriguing, I will definitely reading it more. Waiting for another chapters from your book. Room for improvement are still there but overall it has a nice story.

Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?