whisper of the shadows: a tale of mystery and courage - Reviews

"You truly have no recollection of ever meeting me?"

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Xyrus:madami akong connection XD at kapag gusto nakukuha koXD

"What happened to you? Did you cry?" he asked me then slowly raised his right hand and gently stroked my cheek with his thumb. I just looked away; avoiding his questioning eyes then shrugged my shoulders. "Oh c'mon, I know you. Don't try to hide it. What's your problem, I might help," he said with concern in his voice. I turned to him and fake a smile. "Nah, I'm okay there's no need to worry about." I said while walking back to my bed and continue packing my things.

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Korra:~Good Night~

i decided to be blunt

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Never! Never! Never!  Never! Never!

I only made it 1 1/2 chapters. I really wanted to be able to go further in the story because the author writes well. The author wrote an MC that ended his existence due to his own poor choices. The MC is not deserving of the gift of a system and a regression. The MC gave up. If you can get past the MC giving up on everything due to their own personality then read on!  If I could make one recommendation to the author, I would say make your moopy, depressed character chose to live and not take that final step, but then by a cosmic twist of fate they slip and fall to the “void”. The second chapter is so jarring for a person that just made that choice to be saying “awesome, I love you”