When The Love Comes - Reviews

he chuckled and looked at me. I glared back and slapped his arm. It was thick and tough, and so I ended up hurting myself instead of him. I looked at my hand, it was red. He came closer and looked at my hand. I sighed.

please like this if it reached 100 chapters, so I'll start reading it, but in the first chapter, I can see it's potential

I love the story so far, the pacing and world building is great but I'm begging you to please use dialog and conversation between characters more often to explain the world and also to develop the characters. Thanks you for the story so far I'm excited to see where it goes. (also please please keep the main characters relationship monogamous, there's plenty of harem stuff out there and I appreciate the relationship they have)