What's Wrong with Miss Bratty? - Reviews

"Ya ampun Niel, nggak kok. Ngomong-ngomong ini jam berapa ya? Aku tidur berapa lama?" tanya Sejeong sambil mengedarkan pandangannya mencari jam dinding.

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

The Withering Cold is a truly a novel. it indeed has W writing quality, it has immaculate story development, the character designs are unique and not generated by artificial intelligence. the world background also allows more insight into the novel. overall a must read for fiction fans and webnovel readers as a whole, as this novel is catered for all sorts of audience whilst maintaining it's essence

Speed down the pace of your story a bit,  and add more conversational depth between the characters. Otherwise pretty good plot and have a potential to shine. Keep up the good work!

Does anyone know how to change the book cover. I accidentally clicked that from my camera roll and now it’s just stuck like that.Also I wrote it of course I’m giving it 5 stars

It's hard to give a full 5 star due to how new it is  but people should give it a read, the writing style is smooth and the story line moves in a steady pace. Can't wait for future chapters good luck.