What's Make you cry - Reviews

Karl eyes shot open. The sound of evening breeze rang a smooth melody. He got up to close the window and the curtain. He noticed a sensation on his cheek. He ran his finger on it, then muttered,

Desmond begrudgingly picks up Edna who cries out in pain.

Speaking of resumes it looks like I'm getting a new employee candidate here at Gummy Inc.

Really like the way you are developing story and characters. Started reading it as casual novel but found it really interesting. Please do update new chapters

Don’t judge a book by it’s cover......I’m not new to WebNovel though i lost my main account.... I’ve read books.... to cut the long story short, i never expected to be drawn to this book.. you know, planning to read just the first chapter but later reading every chapter available and waiting for more... lolReally sensing a love triangle...Can’t say more????Waiting for updates ??

Giving myself five stars cos why not? In this book, I've created a female lead who doesn't believe in fantasy at all. But what happens when the world she lives in is filled with mystical creatures? She has to slowly figure them out one by one, and to top it all, she falls for a dragon King. So much for not believing in them... Dear readers, add to the library and enjoy this beautiful read, mixed with real-world and fantasy ❤️

Keep it up author weldon??????????? sarahaeyor ??????????????????????????????

The premise of this story is wonderful as well as the idea behind it. Perhaps it's just me but for some reason the writing comes off awkwardly. For example 'he asked interrogatingly' or 'he said assertively'. You use phrases like that consistently. If a question is asked usually it's automatically in an interrogative tone since an interrogation is just an official year for the questioning that the police do. Basically, it becomes a bit redundant in that aspect. There are also other things you can use to describe besides those adverbs. For instance instead of saying 'he said assertively', a phrase like he stated in a tone that made it clear he was serious. It's longer but it fits in and provides imagery. I am honestly not trying to Lecture of put you down because I think it's amazing to pursue your goals and consistently put in effort. It's just that I personally believe that I'd be doing an injustice by not saying anything because I truly like the premise of the book. It is a skillful blend of both modern and ancient to me.