This story is good and I like the idea of ML waking up in a book that he trash talked. I believe there's room for improvement in the writing quality. It's not bad by any means, but it's not the best it could be.
Also the story is a bit forgettable and I struggled to remained interested. It's a good idea, but it doesn't quite stick the landing for me.
I can tell it'll get better as it goes on, but for now I'll just say this story is good enough.